Nowadays, food has become easier to prepare. Has this change improved the way people live? Use specific reasons and examples to support your
answer.
In this modern era, science has made our lives esay by providing us technology in all fields even in cooking. We all know that food is the basic necessity of life and individuals work absolutely hard in order to have some food. Some people are inclined toward attitude that nowadays preparing food is arduous because of busy life, with machineries it is also not a piece of cake and prepare outside food, whereas others hold opposite perspective. I personally, though, believe that in this century nothing can be more easy than cooking as technology has transform the people lives. In this essay, I intend to put forth my points and reasons of support.
The first exquisite point to be mentioned is that, we are lucky because we do not born in 90s. In old ages no doubt making breakfast, dinner and lunch was really challenging, as they do not have any grinders, toasters, fryers and many more things. It is important for all human beings to eat 3 times a day. To exemplify, my mother told me that she spend almost 6 to 7 hours in kitchen near stove, as she had to chop vegetables by hands. Moreover, now in every single house there is a chopper, juicer and numerous things which makes our life easy. Thus, this example elucidates that the way of living of present people is completely changed.
Secondly, people have time to spend with their family. It is essential to give time to your children and spouse as they look forward to have some talk with each other. The new inventions have reduced the time cooking like before meat took 30 to 40 minutes to cook but now it just take 10 minutes. For instance, I am a working lady i Thought cooking is difficult but when I bought such stuff my life is becaome so relaxed even I get time for outing on daily basis. In past I was so bounded by my home . Therefore, this instance illustrates that science is a mother of all inventions.
To wrap up,I believe as world is getting success in technology the lives of person are improving day by day.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, moreover, really, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, whereas, for instance, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 9.8082437276 10% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1632.0 1977.66487455 83% => OK
No of words: 361.0 407.700716846 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.52077562327 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35889894354 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4732999291 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 212.727598566 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.623268698061 0.524837075471 119% => OK
syllable_count: 520.2 618.680645161 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.4450625319 48.9658058833 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.6666666667 100.406767564 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0555555556 20.6045352989 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.44444444444 5.45110844103 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174231402653 0.236089414692 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0502502237977 0.076458572812 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.063933304341 0.0737576698707 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0956550235889 0.150856017488 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0681780084057 0.0645574589148 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 11.7677419355 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 58.1214874552 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.94 10.9000537634 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 86.8835125448 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.002688172 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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