Nowadays, food has become easier to prepare. Has this change improved the way people live? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Humans need to intake good food to be healthy and lead a happy life. Like the proverb, “Health is Wealth”, we need to be very conscious of what we eat. I personally believe fast and easy food recipes that are famous nowadays have certainly changed the way we live. I believe this for three main reasons which I will explore in the following essay.
First of all, fast food recipes are easy to make but not healthy enough to eat. People are getting used to eating such quick recipes. Most of such food contains ingredients which are very harmful when consumed in larger quantities. This has changed the lifespan of modern humans. For instance, the average human life span has come down to 60-70 years from 90-100 years. People are leading a modern lifestyle at the cost of their health.
Secondly, laziness is seen increasing in people nowadays. Easy food recipes are the main reason for this. They make people lazy by providing unhealthy substances to our diet and also people will never go for recipes that take a lot of time and effort but are healthy. My personal experience is a compelling example of this. One of my friends who was used to eat fast foods has been diagnosed with obesity. The doctor told me that the main reason for that is his unhealthy eating habits. He has to undergo intensive treatment and he will never be able to eat such foods in life.
Finally, unlike the age-old recipes, modern recipes found nowadays require ingredients that are not pure. Most of the ingredients are being degraded of quality. Eating food made with them causes serious side effects. For example, when the government of India substances being used in the Maggie noodles are not pure and unhealthy, it ordered an immediate ban on Maggie in India as eating them is very perilous. This incident could prove they are many harmful foods out there and we need to limit ourselves to homemade recipes whenever possible.
In conclusion, fast foods have changed the lifestyle of people for sure. I feel this way because they are not pure and also making us unhealthy and lazy.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, second, secondly, so, as to, for example, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 15.1003584229 159% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1714.0 1977.66487455 87% => OK
No of words: 362.0 407.700716846 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73480662983 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36191444098 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35810658078 2.67179642975 88% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 212.727598566 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.527624309392 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 537.3 618.680645161 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.0272711215 48.9658058833 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.4166666667 100.406767564 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0833333333 20.6045352989 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.08333333333 5.45110844103 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206512521544 0.236089414692 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0641201799142 0.076458572812 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0486115938153 0.0737576698707 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126552103851 0.150856017488 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0311255089842 0.0645574589148 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 11.7677419355 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 58.1214874552 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.1575268817 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.56 10.9000537634 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.56 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 86.8835125448 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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