Nowadays food has become easier to prepare. Has this change improved the way people live? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Imagine what fun it would be if one could have an American breakfast, a Chinese lunch, and an Indian dinner! And if this could be supplemented with Swiss chocolates, Spanish snacks, Italian delicacies...mmm...it would be a gourmets paradise! Modern life has drastically changed food patterns. These days preparation of food has become easier and faster due to the new gadgets as well as availability of pre-cooked foodstuff. This change has improved the way people live as it has helped tp save time as well as enhanced the quality of food.
Time is at a premium in the modern way of living. with both spouse working, there is little time left for elaborate cooking on a daily basis. Pre-cooked foods that need a minimum of heating/cooking are a great convenience. Time saved in the kitchen can be used for children, other household chores, entertainment, etc.
Package food has to adhere to strict norms of hygiene and has to get an approval from a governmental/ private organization. It has to display its content that would help a consumer to choose whether he wants food with protein/carbohydrate/fats content. The calorie content would also help him to decide which food is suitable to his family. Food is a source of pleasure as well as basic requirement, so a balanced diet is essential for life. Good quality food will help all of us in maintaining excellent health. Packed and pre-cooked food also gives us a wide choice of cuisines so without having to spend much time in learning to cook them.
With new technology the cooking and preserving of food has become easier and faster various gadgets like microwave oven and the food processor, which have simplified and facilitated the process of cooking. Deep freezers and refrigerators help to preserve food for long period , so variety is always available at one fingerprints. A visit to a well-stocked, well displayed food store is both a visual and gastronomical delight.
Modern technology and methods of cooking have improved the quality of life. It has helped save time, improved health and hygiene, provided great variety that is always available. This can be seen as a minor resolution, which is a boon for both gourmands and gourmets. so now one can eats to live as well as live to eat.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Imagine what fun it would be if one could have an American breakfast,...
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... has become easier and faster due to the new gadgets as well as availability of p...
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... gourmands and gourmets. so now one can eats to live as well as live to eat.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, well, as to, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 43.0788530466 44% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1876.0 1977.66487455 95% => OK
No of words: 381.0 407.700716846 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92388451444 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41805628031 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11447481936 2.67179642975 117% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 212.727598566 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.53280839895 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 584.1 618.680645161 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.305604771 48.9658058833 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.8 100.406767564 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.05 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.85 5.45110844103 34% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.5376344086 235% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183305977407 0.236089414692 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0583288497594 0.076458572812 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0600762897972 0.0737576698707 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106415332017 0.150856017488 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0590077508559 0.0645574589148 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 11.7677419355 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 86.8835125448 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.002688172 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 71.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.5 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.