A company has announced that it wishes to build a large factory near your community. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this new influence on your community. Do you support or oppose the factory? Explain your position.
I think it is a good idea to build a factory near my community, I support this announcement. I feel this way for two reasons, which I explain further. The people of my community are lives in a rural area, and also there are a less job opportunities. Some of people is illiterate, so then don’t have a strong source of income. Most of their work is based on the local jobs which are temporary. On the other hand, there are a youth, who is well educated but doesn’t have a plenty of job opportunities.
The advantages of building a factory near my area is, it gives a lots of job opportunities to the youth who is searching a job in metro cities which are far away from their home. Also, it helps to labor people to get a strong source of income. Next thing is that, it helps to grow a market near to my area, because the presence of people than usual helps them to grow their business. People also get an opportunity to start a new business for example, food business or to start a residential business. People get motivates toward the education, also it helps to increase a financial status.
In spite of all these advantages, there are some disadvantages, the possibility of increasing a pollution. If the factory is works of 24hrs then, the life of people will get disturb because of noises. The air pollution may occur because of harmful chemicals which release from factory. Overall, the environment may get disturb because of this. It affects on the health of people.
Therefore, I think, instead of all these disadvantages. Building a factory is a good idea in future respective, because it will bring a lot of opportunities and development in the area. We will overcome all this disadvantages by taking a right action in a right time.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 252, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'Some of', you should use 'the' ('Some of the people') or simply say ''Some people''.
Suggestion: Some of the people; Some people
...lso there are a less job opportunities. Some of people is illiterate, so then don’t have a str...
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Line 3, column 64, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a lot' or simply 'lots'?
Suggestion: a lot; lots
...ing a factory near my area is, it gives a lots of job opportunities to the youth who i...
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Line 4, column 95, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'pollution'.
Suggestion: pollution
...vantages, the possibility of increasing a pollution. If the factory is works of 24hrs then,...
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Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...taking a right action in a right time.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, then, therefore, well, for example, i feel, i think, in spite of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 13.8261648746 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 43.0788530466 65% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1442.0 1977.66487455 73% => OK
No of words: 313.0 407.700716846 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.60702875399 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86700585373 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 212.727598566 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.504792332268 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 468.9 618.680645161 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.2547457717 48.9658058833 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.8947368421 100.406767564 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4736842105 20.6045352989 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.63157894737 5.45110844103 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.114435148805 0.236089414692 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0343307855691 0.076458572812 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0467488837578 0.0737576698707 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0705386729568 0.150856017488 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0276428197436 0.0645574589148 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 11.7677419355 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.16 10.9000537634 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.61 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 86.8835125448 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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