A gift can contributes to a child's development. What gift would you give to help a child develop? Why? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
'A healthy mind in a healthy body' is a maxim I believe in. A strong mind can command a weak body to do impossible things. So, I gift a child a game which help him to sharpen his mind. There are lots of games are available in the market which help child's in their mental growth and progress.
The first kind of game I want to talk about is, Chess. In the Chess game, need more concentration and presence of mind. Also, we need to think more in the Chess. The more mind exercise can be performed while playing a Chess also it involves the critical thinking and understanding. This is how playing a chess helps children to develop their mental ability.
The second type of game is, word puzzle game(scrambles). In this game there are alphabets are available, we have to create a word by joining them. In this kind of game, children get an opportunity to learn new words and improve their vocabulary. Also, this kind of game improve their way of thinking and capacity of remembering. In this they can enjoy while learning something.
This kind of game help in their improvement and also, they can play and also a learn a lot from this. Also, gifts like a soccer ball or a football etc. Help them to improve their physical health. In this kind’s games, the physical activities play main role, so this kind of games help them to get fit and healthy. So, I think this is also the important which can contribute to a child’s development.
Therefore, This kinds games I would suggest as gift and yes, this kind’s of gifts help them to improve their mental and physical health.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, so, therefore, while, i think, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 52.1666666667 71% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1291.0 1977.66487455 65% => OK
No of words: 286.0 407.700716846 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.51398601399 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50968343215 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 212.727598566 63% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.472027972028 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 388.8 618.680645161 63% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.0042853863 48.9658058833 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 64.55 100.406767564 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.3 20.6045352989 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.4 5.45110844103 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.124938689857 0.236089414692 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.047349787527 0.076458572812 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0550670945371 0.0737576698707 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.086788003924 0.150856017488 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0503596157836 0.0645574589148 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.0 11.7677419355 59% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 58.1214874552 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.1575268817 63% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.29 10.9000537634 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.54 8.01818996416 82% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 86.8835125448 46% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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