Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? A zoo has no useful purpose. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Yes, I agree with the statement, I think we are not getting anything from holding animals behind the jail. I explain my point further by giving an example and more details about it.
Firstly, we all know the right place of animals is in jungle not in between humans in a cage. The zoo has no useful purpose and I think it has only disadvantages. For example, if we represent the tiger or lion in the zoo. It might effects on their health or their on growth, because they are not a pet animal they can only survived in the jungle. Also, they get more aggressive when we make them prisoner.
Secondly, zoo’s care taker are not take their responsibility seriously, they did not clean the area where animals stay also, they did feed them properly. And that may increase the maintain cost of zoos. Also, government does not look after it. All these possible things happen, and they only get the more efforts and less output. Having a zoo is only waste of money and it increase difficulties for animals.
Instead of going zoo todays people are prefer to in jungle safari, where they can see different animal which are living freely in jungle. Jungle safari is more interesting than visiting a zoo. And it doesn’t disadvantage like the zoo. Also, it is also beneficial for animals, because they can live in place where they actually deserve to live. And also, in jungle safari, there no special maintain cost. People enjoy jungle safari more than visiting a zoo. And we get better idea about the animals in jungle safari than zoo. Also, it is more adventures than visiting a zoo. And now a days, people are busy in their life they very often visit zoo.
Therefore, in my point of view, having a zoo has no useful purposes. The results are not good for animals and also it is having more maintains. On the other hand, we have an alternative choice, instead of going zoo, we can go to the jungle safari which is have more advantages than zoo.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 176, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...ed them properly. And that may increase the maintain cost of zoos. Also, government does not...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 373, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'increases'?
Suggestion: increases
...ing a zoo is only waste of money and it increase difficulties for animals. Instead of g...
^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 578, Rule ID: NOW_A_DAYS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: nowadays
...ore adventures than visiting a zoo. And now a days, people are busy in their life they ver...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 582, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a day' or simply 'days'?
Suggestion: a day; days
...adventures than visiting a zoo. And now a days, people are busy in their life they ver...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 257, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'had'.
Suggestion: had
...we can go to the jungle safari which is have more advantages than zoo.
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, first, firstly, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, i think, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 52.1666666667 63% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1594.0 1977.66487455 81% => OK
No of words: 350.0 407.700716846 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.55428571429 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32530772707 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34415295176 2.67179642975 88% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.482857142857 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 514.8 618.680645161 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.1402093266 48.9658058833 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.4166666667 100.406767564 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5833333333 20.6045352989 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.95833333333 5.45110844103 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.117227800355 0.236089414692 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.045378332206 0.076458572812 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.062274529193 0.0737576698707 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0764637188022 0.150856017488 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0277118238041 0.0645574589148 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.3 11.7677419355 62% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 58.1214874552 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.52 10.9000537634 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.77 8.01818996416 84% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 86.8835125448 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 176, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...ed them properly. And that may increase the maintain cost of zoos. Also, government does not...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 373, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'increases'?
Suggestion: increases
...ing a zoo is only waste of money and it increase difficulties for animals. Instead of g...
^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 578, Rule ID: NOW_A_DAYS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: nowadays
...ore adventures than visiting a zoo. And now a days, people are busy in their life they ver...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 582, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a day' or simply 'days'?
Suggestion: a day; days
...adventures than visiting a zoo. And now a days, people are busy in their life they ver...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 257, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'had'.
Suggestion: had
...we can go to the jungle safari which is have more advantages than zoo.
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, first, firstly, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, i think, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 52.1666666667 63% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1594.0 1977.66487455 81% => OK
No of words: 350.0 407.700716846 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.55428571429 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32530772707 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34415295176 2.67179642975 88% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.482857142857 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 514.8 618.680645161 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.1402093266 48.9658058833 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.4166666667 100.406767564 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5833333333 20.6045352989 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.95833333333 5.45110844103 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.117227800355 0.236089414692 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.045378332206 0.076458572812 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.062274529193 0.0737576698707 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0764637188022 0.150856017488 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0277118238041 0.0645574589148 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.3 11.7677419355 62% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 58.1214874552 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.52 10.9000537634 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.77 8.01818996416 84% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 86.8835125448 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.