Some people spends their entire lives in one place. Other moves a number of times throughout their lives, looking for better jobs, house, community, or even a climate. Which do you prefer: staying one place or moving in search of other places? Use reasons and specific examples to support your opinion.
Despite the fact that moving from one place to another place in search of jobs, house, community or climate does have advantages, staying in one place contributes to stability in one’s life cannot be overlooked. This is totally depending on individual choice as to what life style they prefer. I feel that staying at one’s place contribute more in our lives and it have their own benefits.
People choose to spends their entire lives in one place, because they want a stability in their live. For me, staying at one place brings a more comfort that moving from one place to another place. There are several reasons behind this is, first thing If I am living in one place for my entire live, So I can build a permanent house for me, where I can live with my family. Secondly, I think this will be also beneficial for my children for their schooling and up bringing and also staying at one place is important for my old parents’ health. Staying at one place may makes life monotonous but it has its own advantages which I cannot be overlooked.
In the other hand, moving from one place to another place, sometimes gives a headache. One of my friends who have this kind of life style. He moved one place to other place on searching of job, community and weather it looks fascinated at first but, when he moves from one city to another he have to start from beginning. Find a house, settling in new place, adjusting in their community and after all that not every time the weather is suitable for him. Also, he will spend more money a lot of money than every time. Sometimes this thing got him a headache.
Hence, I feel that staying at one’s place contributes more peace and stability in our lives also, we can do more focused on our self-development. Moving from one place to another looks fascinating but it is also more hectic and sometimes disturbing.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...n one’s life cannot be overlooked. This is totally depending on individual choice as to what life st...
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Message: Did you mean 'has'?
Suggestion: has
...ace contribute more in our lives and it have their own benefits. People choose to...
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Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'spend'.
Suggestion: spend
...their own benefits. People choose to spends their entire lives in one place, becaus...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... will be also beneficial for my children for their schooling and up bringing and ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...vantages which I cannot be overlooked. In the other hand, moving from one place...
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Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
...en he moves from one city to another he have to start from beginning. Find a house, ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, after all, as to, i feel, i think, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 43.0788530466 107% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1532.0 1977.66487455 77% => OK
No of words: 334.0 407.700716846 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.58682634731 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49201097204 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 212.727598566 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.479041916168 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 503.1 618.680645161 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.7602553316 48.9658058833 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.75 100.406767564 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.875 20.6045352989 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 5.45110844103 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.496946131023 0.236089414692 210% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.186117732933 0.076458572812 243% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.113311247634 0.0737576698707 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.323504206359 0.150856017488 214% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0745153182918 0.0645574589148 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 11.7677419355 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.34 10.9000537634 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.9 8.01818996416 86% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 86.8835125448 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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