Some students prefer to study alone Others prefers to study with a group of students Which do you prefer Use specific reasons and detailed to support your answer

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Some students prefer to study alone. Others prefers to study with a group of students. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and detailed to support your answer.

Studying in group have its own advantages, but also, I can't overlook the benefits of studying alone. I will prefer to study alone, I prefer to study alone but it is easy and convenient for me, which I explain give below.
Studying in group gives us a chance to discuss doubts and problems with friends. While studying in group if one of friend is good at math, so it helps to clear our doubts with math. If I am good at science so, I help to my friends with their respective doubts. Second advantage of studying in group is, if one of us student is feel demotivated to ask a question in classroom, studying in group give him a chance to clear his doubts to with his friends so, he can get a solution and also clear with his subject. Now, in my point of view, studying in group is have some disadvantages, one of them is when we study in a group with our friends, so we do more gossiping than study. And second disadvantage is we do less concentration on studies in group study.
I prefer to study alone because, the advantage of study alone is, more concentration. You study alone with more focused than you study in group with the less distraction. Also, the second advantage is, if you do self-explanation then that help you to remember for long time. Also, I think study alone is help to increase concentration and give stamina to study for long time. The disadvantage to study alone is if, we stuck somewhere in between the topic or math problem, then we have tried to solve it by owns or wait until to ask respective teacher. Personally, I prefer to study alone because I need more concentration and quite atmosphere while studying.
Hence, I prefer to study alone because it improve my stamina and also give to strengths to concentrate more.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, look, second, so, then, while, i think

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1436.0 1977.66487455 73% => OK
No of words: 319.0 407.700716846 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.50156739812 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71156069337 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 212.727598566 65% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.435736677116 0.524837075471 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 457.2 618.680645161 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.3455865793 48.9658058833 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.7333333333 100.406767564 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2666666667 20.6045352989 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.45110844103 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.378514203328 0.236089414692 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.157926171342 0.076458572812 207% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0829420883569 0.0737576698707 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.252767619167 0.150856017488 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0586191156123 0.0645574589148 91% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.82 10.9000537634 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.86 8.01818996416 86% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 86.8835125448 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.


Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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