Do You agree or disagree with the following statement? People should sometimes da things they da not enjoy doing. Use specific reasons and answers to support your opinion.
Life is not a bed of roses, often there are thorns. I therefore agree with the statement that people should sometimes do things they do not enjoy doing. There are number of reasons for doing what we do and not simply enjoyment. In fact if we make enjoyment and the only requirement we are asking for trouble. So early in life we must often learn to do less enjoyable tasks and later on keep in practice by doing something we learn we don't like once in a while.
It would become difficult for us to train our children to do a number of things that they are required to do for their mental and physical growth if we allowed them to do only what they felt like. ' But I don't feel like doing it' is the constant refrain we hear from children and the parental task is get the child to understand that some things need to be done quite simply because they have to be done. Getting up early in the morning, studying daily, maintaining good habits are a few desirable, but not enjoyable tasks. Habituating ourselves to carrying them out early in life is in a large part what makes life livable. I am quite sure that is=f we had to keep on convincing even adults for this, life would quickly become unbearable- and some times it is. Thankfully, the average human being seems to understand the simple point and we don't need to spend all our time to motivating people to perform the many unenjoyable but essential task.
Life often demands that we do work that we do not like at all. It is not possible to always do only things that we enjoy, so we have to do, perhaps unwillingly, all kinds of tasks. Who wouldn't like to eat good and tasty food everyday? But if that leads to health problems then one has tp learn to abstain. For those who hate getting up early in the morning, it may be necessary to do so in order to earn a living or carry out family responsibilities.
It nevertheless remains true that not all work, and not all actions are enjoyable. But adults need to do both, tasks that are enjoyable and unenjoyable as life demands both of them
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, nevertheless, so, then, therefore, while, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 43.0788530466 109% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1661.0 1977.66487455 84% => OK
No of words: 382.0 407.700716846 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.34816753927 4.8611393121 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42095241839 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43489976729 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 212.727598566 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.497382198953 0.524837075471 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 521.1 618.680645161 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.7957210242 48.9658058833 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.2777777778 100.406767564 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2222222222 20.6045352989 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 5.45110844103 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211323019112 0.236089414692 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0822178357277 0.076458572812 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.116282764075 0.0737576698707 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143100672723 0.150856017488 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0725705545573 0.0645574589148 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.95 10.9000537634 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.03 8.01818996416 88% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 86.8835125448 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 65.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.5 Out of 30
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