Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship between people.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Not people behavior only shape their lifestyle but affect their communication as well. In someone perspective, situations that people involved in determining that it is possible to say truth or not. Being honest in telling and doing are essential in reciprocity in every society.
Everything in nature will come back to yourself, whether done well or not. Everyone doing and telling honesty will fond loyalty every time. For instance, there is a story about a farmer milking cows every morning and mixing them with a little water for inflating and selling it to a baker. The baker cooking bread for him using farmer milk bottles. Consequently, the more water in milk the less quality in bread. Truly, the world is like a mirror, dishonesty will come back to yourself.
Telling truth and being honest is crucial for friendship endurance. There is a quote that dishonest people who say a lot of lies are forgetful ones. So, it is inevitable that liers will make more mistakes about what to say and what not to say. As an illustration, a friend of mine, thinking that having integrity in every situation is foolishness, she being sole, finally. She believes that you should change circumstance for benefiting of yourself. If saying truth is beneficial for you, do that, if not, you are permitted to say some lies. So, when her friends, like me, confront her, could not recognize if she is honest or not. One day she schedules to go mountain with her friends, but she says to her professor that my paternal grandmother died and I am required to go to the country to participate in her funeral. One of her friends not knowing about what she said, sees her professor and says thank you for allowing my friend to come mountain with us. Her professor makes angry and takes zero for her course. As she has the same behavior, as mentioned above, with her friends and family, in a long run she is lonely and so she required to exchange her behavior, but it takes a long time from her to make good relationship with others. Because, it is difficult to escape from being dishonest and not lying, as they are self-perpetuating.
As a result, being truthful and telling truth is so important to make and continue the friendship or any other relationships. Despite, one may think that it is not possible, to be honest in every situation, but the good of being honest weights to bad.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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... lying, as they are self-perpetuating. As a result, being truthful and telling ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, finally, if, may, so, well, for instance, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 15.1003584229 159% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 13.8261648746 159% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 54.0 43.0788530466 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1959.0 1977.66487455 99% => OK
No of words: 415.0 407.700716846 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72048192771 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51348521516 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70196027827 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.501204819277 0.524837075471 95% => OK
syllable_count: 607.5 618.680645161 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.51792114695 227% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.6851099698 48.9658058833 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.1739130435 100.406767564 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0434782609 20.6045352989 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.13043478261 5.45110844103 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0970230231595 0.236089414692 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0317405172675 0.076458572812 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0432416201571 0.0737576698707 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0632329100044 0.150856017488 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0216407116874 0.0645574589148 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 11.7677419355 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.8 10.9000537634 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 86.8835125448 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.