Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Because modern life is very complex, it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
During the new era, technology has been made life more and more convenient for people. However, some people argue that nowadays life is very complex due to many changes in daily life and people's thinking. I strongly advocate that young people should have a careful plan and organize in working to be successful.
To begin with, having a good plan before deciding to do something can bring people many benefits. There is an idiom:" Do not decide when you are happy and Do not talk when you are angry." This means that a plan can help teenagers avoid bad situations when they cannot control their behavior. For example, last month, I was in a bad mood due to a problem at school; however, my sister kept annoying me, so that I scolded her, which made me feel bad about that behavior. After I felt good again, I did sorry her and bought her a cake. From this story, I believe that everyone should think carefully before deciding to do anything.
Another factor that young people should have is organization. When people organize everything clearly, it will be a good thing for them. Ho Chi Minh, the first president of my country, said that:" Good exercising, good discipline," which was written for young people in the future generations. This means that keep discipline will help children a lot in the future. For instance, students who always keep their works from class organized can easily look it up back to review for the test compared to students who are not organized and cannot look back at the document to review for the test. Through this example, it motivates all young people to be organized in any field.
All things considered, every child needs to have a plan or organize work due to the many advantages. Children can be successful if they follow these two factors.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 234, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , &apos
...:' Good exercising, good discipline,' which was written for young people in ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, look, so, for example, for instance, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 52.1666666667 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1490.0 1977.66487455 75% => OK
No of words: 313.0 407.700716846 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76038338658 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59517759872 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 212.727598566 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.562300319489 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 459.0 618.680645161 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.769969901 48.9658058833 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.125 100.406767564 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5625 20.6045352989 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.375 5.45110844103 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230615672386 0.236089414692 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0776038073916 0.076458572812 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0526699435051 0.0737576698707 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141294869661 0.150856017488 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0486468766721 0.0645574589148 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 11.7677419355 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.61 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 86.8835125448 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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