Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Boys and girls should attend separate schools. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
School plays an important role for the students. The majority of the time from 24 hours a day is spent in the school and in its related work. It is important point for parents to decide for appropriate school to study for their children’s. Some believe that boys and girls should attend in different schools, while some stands with an opposite preference. In my view boys and girls should study in same school for the following mentioned reasons.
If boys and girls will study in the same school, then they will have scope to share their views. Girls and boys think differently, as presented by the American author in the novel “Men are from Mars, Women are from Venus”. Nowadays there is no discrete difference between boys and girls. Equal number of genders are seen in every fields. For example, I remember my chemistry project which was about construction of different types of hydrogen compounds. In this project, it was team efforts and it comprised of few boys and girls. We worked in co-ordination and our project was selected in the state level competition and we stood at third position among 9 other projects. This was great learning experience for all the participants. Hence, boys and girls can learn better by studying in the same school.
They will not face an issue of adjusting with opposite gender in their future work place. Today, every job has many girls and boys working on different tasks but under the same roof. So, if they have studied in different schools, then they will find hurdles in their working method and place. For example, one incident depicted in English newspaper, in which it was stated that one girl left her job as she was from small town and she studied in girl’s school and also graduated from girl’s college and she was not able to communicate with her boy’s co-workers. Clear difference can be seen with girls and boys, if they have studied in different schools.
One reason of parents insisting for different schools, for girls and boys is the girl’s safety issues. But as the technology has advanced enough and literacy is also increased. So, the school building has got hidden cameras for their safety and various clubs are present for student’s support. Also, school authority takes complete responsibility for students studying in their school and they are also worried about their school’s reputation. So, without fear parents should motivate girls and boys to study together and brighten up their future.
I definitely feel girls and boys should study in the same school. As it will add enormous strength to their confidence and knowledge. So, in my view parents residing in rural areas should be explained about this issue and its importance by the urban population.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 776, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to better', 'to well'
Suggestion: to better; to well
...ipants. Hence, boys and girls can learn better by studying in the same school. They w...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so, then, third, while, as for, for example, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 28.0 13.8261648746 203% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 52.1666666667 117% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2311.0 1977.66487455 117% => OK
No of words: 463.0 407.700716846 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99136069114 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.63868890866 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65164160581 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 227.0 212.727598566 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.490280777538 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 679.5 618.680645161 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6003584229 131% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.7948532219 48.9658058833 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.5925925926 100.406767564 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1481481481 20.6045352989 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.85185185185 5.45110844103 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148303408263 0.236089414692 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0509498256137 0.076458572812 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0558360813598 0.0737576698707 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0980626417856 0.150856017488 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0182874894293 0.0645574589148 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 11.7677419355 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.58 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 86.8835125448 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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