Do you agree or disagree with the statement?
Childhood is the happiest time of a person’s life.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
Childhood is very important phase of individuals life and it occupies many years of one’s life. Childhood is never forgettable and it gathers lots of funny memorable events. Some agrees that childhood is the happiest time among all the ages lived in persons life while few disagrees with it as the child is dependent on family. I agree with the statement that childhood is the happiest time of a person’s life and following are the reasons for this standpoint.
Childhood excludes responsibilities of life. Child has no fear of daily living like paying house bills, earning money for family, no responsibilities towards any family members like parents do have. Childhood period has got abundant memories with friends and families. Free from responsibility allows person to enjoy best and spend their time in the activities they like. In childhood most of the kid enjoy playing outdoor and indoor games. They keep on thinking about new games which they can play and enjoy. I remember playing badminton in my most of the childhood time. I enjoyed a lot and still I feel happy remembering my time with friends during those days. Childhood can be considered as long vacation of a person’s life as it is free from burden of responsibilities.
In childhood elders expect less from child in fact they are always loved by elders around them. Child plays mischiefs without extreme fear of punishment from elders. In childhood period the kid always thinks and does activities far away from adult’s imaginations but occasionally it works with surprising positive outcome. I remember opening locked door with small pin when the door was locked with keys inside the house. During that time, I was trying that accidently but it worked out and door was opened. Elders usually stays liberal towards child and so they are fearless in doing tasks which makes childhood more memorable.
Childhood can be viewed as one movie as it has got lots of sweet memories and fun. Child is unaware about importance of money and other worries. So, one should always allow their children to gather sweet memories of childhood with which they can make themselves happy in adulthood by remembering it.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s happy in adulthood by remembering it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, still, while, i feel, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1840.0 1977.66487455 93% => OK
No of words: 363.0 407.700716846 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06887052342 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3649236973 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76980223945 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.548209366391 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 553.5 618.680645161 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.024571821 48.9658058833 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.6363636364 100.406767564 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5 20.6045352989 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.90909090909 5.45110844103 35% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.277960038812 0.236089414692 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.088594717855 0.076458572812 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0999418004032 0.0737576698707 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182079480649 0.150856017488 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.138315287823 0.0645574589148 214% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 11.7677419355 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.83 10.9000537634 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 86.8835125448 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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