Childhood is the beginning of a person's journey of life. This is the time when a person grows to understand the world. Childhood is the happiest time of a person's life. This can be seen from the fact that, in a survey, 97 percent of the adults responded that if they get a chance to go back and relive their childhood they would do so. Although adulthood has its own advantages such as you are free to make your own decision, I personally believe that Childhood is the best time of their lives.
First of all, when a person is in his/her childhood, He/she is free of all the responsibilities that he has to face during the rest if his/her life. Children do not need to think about the various problems such as earning money, bringing and cooking food, etc. To corroborate this I can give my own example. My passport was going to be issued when I was 12 years old, back then when I was a child. I distinctly remember waking up in the morning, my father asked me to sign the official documents and the application for my passport. And after a few days my passport arrived at my home. It was very easy for me. But when I was applied for renewal for my passport that is when things got hard. This happened 5 months ago when I turned 18, my passport got expired and I had get it renewed. So since I became an adult I had to go to Pune's passport office (which is a 2 hour drive), wait there for 4-5 hours for my turn and then my passport got renewed. This was exhausting and my whole day got wasted.
Secondly, one of the main activities that make childhood so joyful is play. Everybody reminisces their fun childhood memories about playing with their friends. This is what is so fun about childhood; one can play as much as he/she wants during their childhood. Sometimes you do silly things at which you do not get laughed at everybody thinks that this is cute. If a child can make mistakes they are easily forgiven. Like, when my younger brother broke the glass table top while playing with his ball, he was not scolded at all. Another great thing about childhood is everybody loves you which is so exhilarating. There are no doubt many more points that makes childhood the greatest time in a person's life.
In conclusion, childhood is the sweetest time a person can live through. Children are loved by all, they do not have to worry about responsibilities and mostly they can enjoy and play as much as they want. So I would suggest parents to let their children enjoy these days so that they can make memories which they can remember later on in their lives and feel rejoiced once again.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, secondly, so, then, while, as to, in conclusion, no doubt, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 28.0 15.1003584229 185% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 21.0 11.0286738351 190% => OK
Pronoun: 76.0 43.0788530466 176% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2113.0 1977.66487455 107% => OK
No of words: 479.0 407.700716846 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.41127348643 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.67825486995 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46035329394 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 232.0 212.727598566 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.484342379958 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 637.2 618.680645161 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6003584229 131% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.8414579975 48.9658058833 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.2592592593 100.406767564 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7407407407 20.6045352989 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.85185185185 5.45110844103 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155865771896 0.236089414692 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0626486039201 0.076458572812 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0860171902913 0.0737576698707 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121401117213 0.150856017488 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0913618263757 0.0645574589148 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 11.7677419355 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 58.1214874552 137% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.1575268817 63% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.0 10.9000537634 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.85 8.01818996416 85% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 86.8835125448 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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