It goes without saying that, we as Homo sapiens live in an age when our life has undergone profound changes and became more sophisticated. By this definition, the swift and monumental scientific and technological achievements have brought stress beside the convenience. Indeed, our hectic life caused to get more busy in our business and we find less time for taking care of our families. Definitly, thi issue in urbun areas is severly striking, but in the rural area due to relax life is not critical. the following essay takes an elaborating look at to what extent this notion is true and what are its main reason.
there is no denying that we should allocate certation proportion of our time in a day to spend with our parents, wife/husband and children, even though we have faced with overload work. believe it or not those who living in the urbun areas tckeling with thousands of problems including wasting their time on traffic congestion, struggling in the work environment and preparing the neccessities of home. add to this some other sudden accedents like becoming unwell or expedition to a mission. in this conditions there never would remain time for being beside the family.
Conversely, the all thing are diffferent in the rural area; because all members of family are working alonge eachother and are helpfull in occupations. Therefore, they never experience the emotional defficiency. A group of sociologists and psycologists carried out an investigation, at ANU University, to compare life satisfaction between rural and urbun places. Ultimately, they announced that the life length in rural erea are higher than urbun ereas by 14 percent, while the divorce rate is markedly high in the urbun areas which is about 36 percent more than urbun areas.
to wrap it up, according to the aforementioned materials we can reach a conclusive conclusion that people who live in rural ereas are more happy. generally, individuals in rural ereas benefits low stress, low divorce rate, low harrassment, clear weather and being beside family.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, conversely, if, look, so, therefore, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 43.0788530466 63% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1721.0 1977.66487455 87% => OK
No of words: 335.0 407.700716846 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13731343284 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88120169974 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 212.727598566 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.617910447761 0.524837075471 118% => OK
syllable_count: 550.8 618.680645161 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.3741346375 48.9658058833 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.733333333 100.406767564 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3333333333 20.6045352989 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.53333333333 5.45110844103 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187059059961 0.236089414692 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0518622207637 0.076458572812 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.055299094782 0.0737576698707 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103408604921 0.150856017488 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0288392812411 0.0645574589148 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 11.7677419355 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 10.9000537634 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.35 8.01818996416 117% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 86.8835125448 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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