Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Environmental issues are too complex to be handled by the individual.
As human activities severely increase, the environmental issues become more and more serious not only to different countries and their governments but also to the reliable community which we are living in. The environmental issue now can be a single challenge above all towards humans. Lots of people and organizations work mindlessly in day and night to solve this complex problem; therefore, a lot of people emphasize that to deal with environmental problems individually is impossible because it is too complex to handle. However, in my opinion, I think everyone has the responsibility and ability to solve this problem no matter how serious and complicated it is.
Everyone is an indispensable part of the community, so the pollution could not come from an individual person or a single group; it is the result which is caused by the whole human spice. It is ridiculous if one who caused the problem says “ I cannot deal with this problem because it is too complex”. This big community is constricted by humans, so every change in this community is hard to get rid of everyone’s efforts, which is totally the same as the environmental issues. The bad scenes of the natural environment are not only because people who spit on the road, who cut down the forest, who overly mine the oil from the underground, or who always throw the plastic garbage everywhere; but it is because all these things happened together, which finally cause the ultimate condition that we are seeing now. Nevertheless, if every individual takes care of their behavior that they do to the environment, they can individually succeed to rescue the communal environment.
On the other hand, Various ways are there for people to singly solve the problem of environmental issues. People always say that the ways to solve the problem are more than the problem itself. The whole world or community is undoubtedly abnormous to an individual, but if they only put the view on their personal life, the problem to them will just be a piece of cake; for instance, in the neighborhood which I used to live in, the market always uses the paper bag instead of the plastic bag; Also, A bunch of people who always consume in this market will bring their own bag to hold the products they bought. In this way, people can easily protect the environment of this neighborhood.
No matter who takes care of the environmental problem, government or big organization, the basically important unit which will carry out and operate the laws or activities are the rural people. Governments or the popular corporation is only the leader of the mind, people are the real force to operate it and the core of success. Moreover, governments or organizations are all composed of a small number of people, but people in a small quantity will not make a big impact on the whole community, just as I said before. For example, in my fatherland, for the government to protect the environment, they set the law to limit the driving of private cars by control the license plate number by date. Since people are strictly following the law, our environment after those days became much better than it was.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ceed to rescue the communal environment. On the other hand, Various ways are ther...
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Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, use 'a few', or use 'some'
Suggestion: a few; some
...ts or organizations are all composed of a small number of people, but people in a small quantity ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, therefore, for example, for instance, i think, in my opinion, on the whole, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 15.1003584229 172% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 64.0 52.1666666667 123% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2620.0 1977.66487455 132% => OK
No of words: 538.0 407.700716846 132% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86988847584 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.81610080973 4.48103885553 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86547901714 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 260.0 212.727598566 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.483271375465 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 841.5 618.680645161 136% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 9.0 3.08781362007 291% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.1344086022 154% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 88.9563868102 48.9658058833 182% => OK
Chars per sentence: 154.117647059 100.406767564 153% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.6470588235 20.6045352989 154% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.05882352941 5.45110844103 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.135407312548 0.236089414692 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0470379935212 0.076458572812 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0564112448798 0.0737576698707 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.088904883087 0.150856017488 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0629134200745 0.0645574589148 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 11.7677419355 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.01 58.1214874552 69% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 10.1575268817 152% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.56 10.9000537634 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 86.8835125448 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 10.002688172 155% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.0537634409 143% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.247311828 156% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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