Education is considered one of the most important aspects in our lives. Nowadays, we are living in a very dynamic world and colleges try to improve the education style with many advanced technologies. I am sure that many people would believe that increase the professors' salaries is a great idea, while others would disagree. However, when it comes to me I totally agree that all colleges should increase the professor's salaries. I feel this way for two important reasons, which I will demonstrate in the following essay.
To begin with, spending more money on professors' salaries can motivate all professor. Recently, many schools try to spend more money on salaries in order to encourage professor to do their best and let them help many students. For instance, my uncle is a professor in medical school and he told me that the university last year raised his salary by ten percent. Moreover, the university provided him with a great medical coverage. In fact, all of these tremendous actions let him spend more hours to prepare for the lectures, making a lot of tests for students, and stay with the students at library to help them to finish their graduation project. Furthermore, my uncle would able to help many students to finish their paperwork on time and he was so motivated during the lecture. Consequently, many students would able to interact with him during the classes and absorbe all the materials in a very professional manner. As you can see, increase the teachers' salaries can make them so satisfied and motivated to spend more hours with students to help them catch their goals. Moreover, many students can graduated with a high score.
In addition, spending more money on professors' salary can let professor improve their skills. In this time, many professor try to take a lot of classes to help them to be up to date. Furthermore, many teachers try to learn more about the new technology to cope with the dynamic world. For example, my brother is a student in a science school and the his college gave money to the professor to spend it on educational trip. Moreover, the university picked three professors to travel abroad to learn new knowledge about the new microscopes and how they can examine the tiny bacteria. In fact, they would be able to learn new advanced technique and they improve their abilities. Moreover, when they came back to their country they spend a lot of time with students to teach them all of these new style of education. On the other hand, my college never spend money on professor. So, all professor are demotivated and they could not help us on our subjects. As a result, many students graduated with a very bad score and many of them could not find a career after their graduation. This experience taught me that professor should get high salary.
In sum, I agree that colleges should spend more money on professors. This is because high salary will motivate all professor to do their best to help students, and because this will help them to improve their skills.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 37, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'professors'' or 'professor's'?
Suggestion: professors'; professor's
... In addition, spending more money on professors salary can let professor improve their ...
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Line 5, column 347, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'his'?
Suggestion: the; his
...er is a student in a science school and the his college gave money to the professor to ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, furthermore, however, moreover, so, while, for example, for instance, i feel, in addition, in fact, as a result, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 9.8082437276 194% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 63.0 43.0788530466 146% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 77.0 52.1666666667 148% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2506.0 1977.66487455 127% => OK
No of words: 520.0 407.700716846 128% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81923076923 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.77530192783 4.48103885553 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60856293612 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 212.727598566 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.413461538462 0.524837075471 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 781.2 618.680645161 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6003584229 131% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.3195888868 48.9658058833 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.8148148148 100.406767564 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2592592593 20.6045352989 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.88888888889 5.45110844103 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 11.8709677419 152% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161764500434 0.236089414692 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0563027364609 0.076458572812 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0481046625956 0.0737576698707 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114150473586 0.150856017488 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0274916135715 0.0645574589148 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.13 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 86.8835125448 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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