Education is considered one of the most important aspects in our lives. Recently, there are a lot of states that provide students with new educational tools to improve their skills. Nowadays, professors play an important role to get many students graduated with high skills every year. I am sure that many people will agree that increase the professors' salaries is a great idea, while others would disagree. However, when it comes to me I totally convinced that it is a such great idea to increase the professors' salaries. I feel this way for two important reasons, which I will demonstrate in the following essay.
To begin with, increase the professors's salaries can get them highly motivated. Professors spend a lot of energy with students to let them absorb the information and improve their knowledge. Moreover, teachers is the most influence person in students practical life. For instance, my daughter at in art school and the university decided to increase the salary by ten percent for the whole university professors stuff. Furthermore, they decided to give them more medical benefits. So, many professor get motivated and they started to spend more hours with the students after the school day. Moreover, they started to provide their students with online courses before the exams time. Consequently, the students got a good chance to interact with their highly motivated professor and they would able to understand the materials. So, by the end of the year, they graduated with very high scores. As a result, students can benefit the whole community and decrease the unemployment level. On the other hand, my cousin lives at urban area and the schools over their spend very little money on professors' salary. So, many professors are frustrated and demotivated. As a result, they could not provide their studets with specific materials. Consequently, this way of professor treatment let the city in bad situation. As you can see, professors can get energized with the hoighly salary and that will reflect positive on students.
In addition, high salary can help professors to improve their skills ability. Nowadays, we are live in a very dynamic world and we have tremendous advanced technologies. Moreover, professors have to have a good skills to cope with this new technology. For example, my brother lives at Italy and he is a medical school. In fact, schools at Italy gave a high salary for the professor. So, professor would able to travel abroad to different county to get new experience and get in touch with people from different perspective. Furthermore, they would able to cover the trip's fee from their own pocket. This is because they have a great salary. In addition, when they get back to their home country they can provide their students with the new medical tools and technology. Consequently, highly educated professor will reflect positive on the community. nevertheless, if the universities did not pay well, professor could not travel abroad to gain new capabilities. This experience taught me that professors will aim to travel a broad to cope the dynamic world if they get high salary.
In sum, I totally agree that universities have to increase the professors' salary. This is because this will get them more motivated, and because they can improve their skills that can reflect positive on students and the whole societies.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, furthermore, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, well, while, for example, for instance, i feel, in addition, in fact, as a result, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 9.8082437276 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 59.0 43.0788530466 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 69.0 52.1666666667 132% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2816.0 1977.66487455 142% => OK
No of words: 553.0 407.700716846 136% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09222423146 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.84932490483 4.48103885553 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75859647593 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 229.0 212.727598566 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.414104882459 0.524837075471 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 874.8 618.680645161 141% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 35.0 20.6003584229 170% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.1901126103 48.9658058833 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 80.4571428571 100.406767564 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8 20.6045352989 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.22857142857 5.45110844103 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 24.0 11.8709677419 202% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.107963390837 0.236089414692 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0332928906108 0.076458572812 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0343933133914 0.0737576698707 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.076588016538 0.150856017488 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0274664616959 0.0645574589148 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 10.9000537634 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.18 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 86.8835125448 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 30 minutes.
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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