Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? To improve the quality of education, universities should spend money on salaries university professors. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Professors are an influential role in the lives of students.They are claimed to direct an individual to his goals and help in achieve them. The influence these professors have on the young minds of the students helps in creating responsible citizens of a society. There are different views regarding the salaries of the professors and I completely agree that they should be paid more because of the essential role they play in the society.

It is quite a common trend that a person who holds higher responsibility is given more respect, credibility and hence given a higher pay scale as well. Considering the essential role these professors play in the students life, it becomes important that they are paid in proportion to their tasks.

Dissatisfaction among the professors might have a larger negative impact on the society. The dissatisfaction risen mainly due lower salaries than expected might reduce the performance of the professors, thereby hampering the future of the students. Since the students majorly rely on the professors for knowledge and over the duration of the course, un-cooperated behavior of the professors might affect the students current studies and in turn affect their future.

Unhappy professors are a liability to the university as well. Under performing students affect the reputation of the university and hence, considering the long term effects, it would be beneficial for the university to have happy and satisfied teaching staff.

To conclude, I would say that performance of an individual is at its best when he is happy. So it is essential that the universities should spend more money on salaries of the professors and keep them happy and satisfied.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, regarding, so, well

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 43.0788530466 56% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 52.1666666667 71% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1427.0 1977.66487455 72% => OK
No of words: 274.0 407.700716846 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20802919708 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.48103885553 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01508673872 2.67179642975 113% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 212.727598566 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.510948905109 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 449.1 618.680645161 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.4730919331 48.9658058833 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.916666667 100.406767564 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8333333333 20.6045352989 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.5 5.45110844103 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.096745406196 0.236089414692 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0425215516106 0.076458572812 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0601604306546 0.0737576698707 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0635236868134 0.150856017488 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0537010596067 0.0645574589148 83% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 11.7677419355 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 10.9000537634 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 86.8835125448 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200

Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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