Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is important to know about events happening around the world, even if it is unlikely that they will affect your daily life.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
I agree that it is important to know about events happening around the world even if it is unlikely that they will affect your daily life. The reasons are as follows.
First of all, people should have broad horizons, and knowing about events occurring around the world can broaden their horizons. For example, I read a lot of pieces of news from TV channels of different countries, such as CNN, BBC, DW, etc., and those news may sometimes have extremely different opinions on the same things. Therefore, by doing so, people can understand different aspects from different countries on the exact same things. Additionally, that makes people think out of the box and learn how to realize international affairs in a more respectful way.
Secondly, people should always learn new things, and knowing about events happening outside their own countries helps them learn new knowledge. For example, there are a lot of TV channels that introduce cultures and lifestyles of different countries, and by watching those channels, people can get familiar with those cultures and lifestyles. When they have chances to travel to the countries, it will be easier for them to get accustomed to the local cultures, and also they can have the abilities to avoid offending local people unintentionally.
Last but not least, people should prepare for confronting things that may happen to them in the future, and being aware of events happening around the world allows them to do so. For example, the Ukraine-Russia war is happening right now, and people in other countries should know about that. Since there are a lot of countries that are under such external threats, people have to learn from this to prepare for potential outbreaks of wars. People should start to think about how to defend their own countries against the external threats, and furthermore, people all over the world should find ways to maintain peace among those countries that have significant conflicts right now.
Therefore, I totally believe that it is vital for people to be aware of events happening around the world, even if those events may not affect their daily lives. Knowing about events happening in different countries does help people to broaden their horizons, learn new things, and even know how to prepare for unpredictable events.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 247, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this news' or 'those newses'?
Suggestion: this news; those newses
...ntries, such as CNN, BBC, DW, etc., and those news may sometimes have extremely different ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.0752688172 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1933.0 1977.66487455 98% => OK
No of words: 380.0 407.700716846 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08684210526 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41515443553 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60072837656 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 212.727598566 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.452631578947 0.524837075471 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 566.1 618.680645161 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 9.0 1.86738351254 482% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 48.8997159728 48.9658058833 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.866666667 100.406767564 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3333333333 20.6045352989 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.13333333333 5.45110844103 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214873451702 0.236089414692 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103807715326 0.076458572812 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.155543467869 0.0737576698707 211% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.21303929955 0.150856017488 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.218983051174 0.0645574589148 339% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 11.7677419355 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 58.1214874552 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 10.9000537634 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.54 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 86.8835125448 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.