Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is important to know about events happening around the world, even if it is unlikely that they will affect your daily life. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Although you were asleep last night, the world was not. It will be interesting for you if you know every moment a specific event occurs in a piece of the world, in Canada, China, or England. Personally, I believe that It is not essential to follow the news in newspapers or TV programs every day. I feel this way for two main reasons which I explore in the following essay.
First of all, it will take your time if you want to read all the news or try to know about all the events happening around the world. In every country, you can find news about politics, sports or economy which belong to that country and It is not possible to know about all of them. Today, people use social media or the internet to search for whatever they want, but who has time to search for all this news? My own experience is a compelling example of this. When I was a student in university, I had a mathematics exam, and I had to study hard for it. During my studying, I used to take my phone and search for special news. When I read it on a website, I saw other news and follow them without paying attention to my exam. After some hours, I looked at my watch and noticed I spent many hours on the internet.
Secondly, it is not necessary to know about events, which it is unlikely that they will affect your daily life. Actually, many news is about some other countries, and if you miss them, you will not lose anything. For instance, last month, I did not access the internet for about a week. So, I could not check my accounts on social media. During those days, I did not feel that I lost an important thing, and Just I did my daily work. So, it will not change anything if you know about all the news or do not.
In conclusion, I firmly believe that it is not essential to notice about events which occur around the world. This is because you have to spend a huge time to read or listen to all the news and on the other hand, you will not lose any special thing if you do not follow the news.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, first, if, look, second, secondly, so, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, you know, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 62.0 43.0788530466 144% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1610.0 1977.66487455 81% => OK
No of words: 384.0 407.700716846 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.19270833333 4.8611393121 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4267276788 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.20902111931 2.67179642975 83% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 212.727598566 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.471354166667 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 499.5 618.680645161 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 19.0 9.59856630824 198% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.806603088 48.9658058833 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.5 100.406767564 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2 20.6045352989 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.6 5.45110844103 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.88709677419 225% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274392142883 0.236089414692 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0848422547236 0.076458572812 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0852936220062 0.0737576698707 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17944960832 0.150856017488 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0398969980924 0.0645574589148 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 11.7677419355 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 58.1214874552 133% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.02 10.9000537634 64% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.84 8.01818996416 85% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 86.8835125448 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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