Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is more important to read or watch the news presented by people whose views are similar to your own than by people whose views are different from yours.
In today’s convoluted world, with the development of human’s modern society and galloping rate of science and technology, increasing number of people tend to keep abreast of daily events. In effect, there are infinite and assorted avenues to be cognizant of the latest news such as the internet, radio, and above all, television. While some surmise that grasping the news presented by people with analogous perspective can endow them with overt constructive benefits, the popular sentiment to which I vehemently cling is that being exposed to the news with distinctive viewpoints can play a consequential role in the efficacious perception of the news occurring day in, day out. The following paragraphs lend credence to this view.
To commence, what provokes people to be exposed news with miscellaneous opinions is expanding their horizon. To shed more light on this, one of the prerequisites of flourishing in nowadays hectic life is that people entail acquiring a copious amount of precise and concise information so as to be able to make rational immediate decisions. Catching the news from individuals with divergent perspectives, human beings would be able to be conscious of every single facet of a piece of news and have a superior understanding of that particular news. By applying this fashion, one is bound to assimilate consideration into every potential aspect of an issue before coming to a resolution. Consequently, not merely can receiving news from dissimilar views assist one to enjoy more comprehensive news, but they also broaden one's views about everyday life issues.
Another exquisite point is rooted in the fact that more precious knowledge is set to be procured by following the news from people along with disparate viewpoints. Needless to say, an issue might be considered from diverse angles which every single angle could generate something new about that specific issue. Should one be aware of an event in toto, assorted dimensions of that event should be investigated thoroughly. Further and even more importantly, though, gained knowledge via getting news from the media with different viewpoints can be responsible for domination and supremacy alike. By virtue of the attained power, a perfect setting could be provided for prompt and cursory reaction in various situations. That is, getting the news from those sources possessing sundry perspectives is highly likely to create superiority in terms of power and knowledge.
In the final analysis, I have to reiterate my standpoint that it is catching news from sources with entirely distinct attitudes that produce critical thinking ability as well as knowledge and power. It is hoped that the daily caliber of individuals would boost by obtaining vase amount of information through following varied news sources.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, if, so, well, while, as to, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 15.1003584229 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 43.0788530466 53% => OK
Preposition: 77.0 52.1666666667 148% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2376.0 1977.66487455 120% => OK
No of words: 443.0 407.700716846 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.36343115124 4.8611393121 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.58776254615 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95497484605 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Unique words: 258.0 212.727598566 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582392776524 0.524837075471 111% => OK
syllable_count: 749.7 618.680645161 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.9463435642 48.9658058833 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.764705882 100.406767564 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0588235294 20.6045352989 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.23529411765 5.45110844103 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206602732435 0.236089414692 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0699444124289 0.076458572812 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0524446854167 0.0737576698707 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1288260913 0.150856017488 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0344137701967 0.0645574589148 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 11.7677419355 143% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 58.1214874552 63% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.1575268817 144% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 10.9000537634 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.27 8.01818996416 128% => OK
difficult_words: 150.0 86.8835125448 173% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 10.002688172 200% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.247311828 146% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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