In my opinion, I believe It is important to make new friends than to only having old friends for two reasons. I will explore the reasons in the following essay.
First of all, It is essential to make new friends because it introduces us to new culture. In this vast world, there are numerous cultures which we are unaware of, One way to get to know about culture’s of different countries is to make new friends. For example, when I started out my graduate study in United States, I had chance and privilige of interacting with people from across the world, which as a result introduced me to their culture's and lifestyle. It was a very fun and great learning opportunity to me. In contrast, had I avoided making new friends and choose to keep my old friends, I would have lost an amazing opportunity to learn about other people's culture and life. Additionally, learning from new friends, which I made during my graduate study was in fact a very fun thing and also made me a very strong person.
Secondly, when we make new friends, we open ourselves to new and exciting business opportunities. My business is one of the best example for this. Few years back when I was planning to start my own technology company, I was finding it very difficult to raise funds. During one of visits to a business conference, I met Mark, and we eventually ended up becoming friends. Mark not only helped me raise funds for the company. Moreover, He also gave me ideas to improve the product of my company. On the other hand, If I had hesitated on making new friends, I would have failed at raising funds for my company and would have failed at building a successful product. Thus, making new friends helps us find new opportunity which can impact our life in a positive manner
In conclusion, I believe we should be open to make new friends as it make our life more fun, gives us a chance of learning new thing and introduces us to exciting opportunity.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 744, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER
Message: Consider replacing "in a positive manner" with adverb for "positive"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, as to, for example, in conclusion, in contrast, in fact, as a result, first of all, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 48.0 43.0788530466 111% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1597.0 1977.66487455 81% => OK
No of words: 350.0 407.700716846 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.56285714286 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32530772707 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6464068825 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 212.727598566 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.524837075471 95% => OK
syllable_count: 510.3 618.680645161 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.1376225004 48.9658058833 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.8125 100.406767564 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.875 20.6045352989 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6875 5.45110844103 196% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182818482554 0.236089414692 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0658990181786 0.076458572812 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0761144438916 0.0737576698707 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15661264764 0.150856017488 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0788680523576 0.0645574589148 122% => OK
automated_readability_index: 11.0 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.17 10.9000537634 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.38 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 86.8835125448 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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