Do you agree or disagree with following statement ? It is more important to keep you old friends than it to make new friends,
Surrounding yourself with good friends is one of the blessings in life. They make life valuable, where they can be your support system and safe heaven when life hits you hard. By their existence, life obstacles can be solved. As they say, a friend in need is a friend indeed.
And while many people prefer to keep their old friends, I personally disagree with that, I believe that having new friends is Essential. I feel this for several reasons. To begin with, every person goes through different phases in life, and during this transition, the character itself might change, for example, the criteria of choosing friends differ from age to age, so what you be looking for in a friend will not be the same through childhood to adulthood. In addition, life takes people to different places according to their career. My personal experience is a compelling example of this, after graduating from dental school and working as a dentist, I found all the people around me are only from the medical field, and that was an absolute coincidence, it was not intentional to be in a specific circle, but life takes you to situations and individuals you never thought of being with. Last but not least, making new friendship means that you actually have excellent communication skills and the ability to adapt doubtlessly to society, for instance as part of my job, I always travel around the world for attending international conferences and keeping myself updated with new courses, during all my travels I always meet new people with different cultures and thankfully I enjoy it and I can blend in effortlessly within no time, not like my friend Maha, who suffers during traveling because she does not like to know new friends, she encloses her self with the old mates.
to sum up, its extremely important to make new friends, at the same time it does not mean to end the relationship with the old ones. What always matters is to have real friends who are truly faithful and loving, regardless of who you are. So choose them wisely and put in mind the concept of accepting new friends.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, if, look, so, while, for example, for instance, i feel, in addition, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 52.1666666667 105% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1722.0 1977.66487455 87% => OK
No of words: 361.0 407.700716846 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77008310249 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35889894354 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59877498407 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576177285319 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 518.4 618.680645161 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.1344086022 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 154.097448612 48.9658058833 315% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 132.461538462 100.406767564 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.7692307692 20.6045352989 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.30769230769 5.45110844103 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.30114011933 0.236089414692 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103193297276 0.076458572812 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0745460046683 0.0737576698707 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201548143543 0.150856017488 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.032398188084 0.0645574589148 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 11.7677419355 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.99 58.1214874552 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 86.8835125448 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.0537634409 127% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.247311828 146% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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