Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The knowledge we gain from personal experiences is more valuable than the experience we gain from books. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. Do not use memorized examples.
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The knowledge we gain from personal experiences is more valuable than the experience we gain from books. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. Do not use memorized examples.
Nowadays, there are many ways for people to learn about the world that they are live in. Personally, I believe that our personal experience gives us the opportunity to enhance our understanding better than books. I feel this way for several reasons which I will explore in the following essay.
First of all, we learn a lot by making mistakes. As long as we try new things, we must make mistakes, and it fine to do so as long as we could learn from those faults. My personal experience is a compelling example of this. When I was a student in the university, I did my internship in a well-known company in the IT sector. In that time, I was assigned to work with a team on a programming project. I did a lot of mistakes, especially in the coding phase, even that I took courses in the college in the same language program that we were work on. I didn’t learn how to know my weaknesses point until I made mistakes in the project, thus I could overcome them and improve my programming skills and abilities.
Secondly, I think reading books would only give us the theoretical aspect of the knowledge not the practical one. Moreover, theoretical background would not be turn into useful knowledge unless if we practice it. Indeed, by our personal experiences we can get the real benefit from the book. For instance, my brother studied business in the university, but he did not imply his marketing, finance, and accountant knowledge in the real life. As a result, he did not success in when he launched his start-up company. In contrast, his friend , who spend more than four years in university, used the knowledge that he gained from university while he was in third year, and from the experience that he got, he succeeds in his personal project.
To sum up, I am of the opinion that the experience that we gain through our lives is more helpful than getting knowledge from books. This is because the chance of learning from our mistakes, and because the practical challenges we face.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, third, thus, well, while, for instance, i feel, i think, in contrast, as a result, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 67.0 43.0788530466 156% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1869.0 1977.66487455 95% => OK
No of words: 394.0 407.700716846 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74365482234 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45527027702 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74354232978 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 212.727598566 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.52538071066 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 578.7 618.680645161 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.6957928644 48.9658058833 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.9545454545 100.406767564 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9090909091 20.6045352989 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 5.45110844103 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.490704497237 0.236089414692 208% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.142355614369 0.076458572812 186% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.149863090147 0.0737576698707 203% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.334685396966 0.150856017488 222% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.337049740134 0.0645574589148 522% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 11.7677419355 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 10.9000537634 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.24 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 86.8835125448 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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