Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Living today is more comfortable and easier than when your grandparents were children.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Nowadays modern technology is the major reason for the people to enjoy their life comfortably. The people are attracted to this technology in order to enjoy their peaceful life. Even more, we can say that they are depended on technology for greater use. Some people argue that by adopting technology into our life's created a boundary line between people. As the people are always into phones and watching TV rather than talking to people and sharing their opinions like before. As far as I'm concerned, I agree that Modern life is much comfortable than the life of our ancestors. I will be providing two main reasons for my agreement hereunder.
Firstly, we can get what we need just by sitting at home and we can rely on the technology we are provided with. For instance, ordering food , calling 911 in case of any emergency and many shopping sites to shop online. Following example is from my own personal experience. suddenly, I had a severe congestion in my chest and I was worried as there were no people at home. I called 911 and explained my situation. Moreover, they came to my home in just 10 min and saved my life. In olden days, we don't have a facility like this and people ended up with greater discomfort, evenmore, the delay in doctor's response caused death. From this example, we can prove that modern era is comfortable for the people to live by relying on the technology.
Furthermore, in this busy schedule of life where people are living far away from their parents to earn money, study, and to work, they can still be able to check on them with phones and can video call them to see. For example, I study in a urban city far away from my village. I have a smartphone through which I'm able to call them and see them often. Additionally, these phones took away my home sickness and also gave me support of my family as a strength. By this, we can know that being far to our loved ones is not a problem in this modern age with technology and can achieve many things with the support. Finally, the living in olden days has its own advantages, as they lived in unpolluted areas, being surrounded by people will give them most strength rather than being away and talking through phones, the quality of life is much better in those days because of the absence of junk food and with better health. All in all, by considering all the points into account, I vehemently assure that living in this generation is more comfortable than the olden days because it not only provides us with the things whenever we want and where ever we need but also the technology which keeps people connected being far from each other.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, so, still, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 62.0 43.0788530466 144% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 69.0 52.1666666667 132% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2158.0 1977.66487455 109% => OK
No of words: 473.0 407.700716846 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.56236786469 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.66353547975 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44432750558 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 236.0 212.727598566 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.498942917548 0.524837075471 95% => OK
syllable_count: 689.4 618.680645161 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.2872781993 48.9658058833 146% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.0909090909 100.406767564 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 20.6045352989 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 5.45110844103 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0979078355228 0.236089414692 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0314276555592 0.076458572812 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0283882475331 0.0737576698707 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0683041356716 0.150856017488 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0129175082714 0.0645574589148 20% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 11.7677419355 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.17 10.9000537634 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 86.8835125448 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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