Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: the only effective way for the government to encourage energy conservation is to increase the price of gasoline and electricity.
Due to the surge of population, the use of energy is significantly increasing. Whether changing in prices is a good way to make people concern using the energy, it has side effects to many groups of people, especially the poor. I disagree with the statement that increasing the price of gasoline and electricity is the right way to support energy conservation.
To begin with, raising the price has an effect to the cost of production. Many companies have been using the energy in many processes, especially in the stage of production. If the price of the investment is higher, the companies inevitably increase the price of their products. This can come to the inflation when everything is more expensive and people are not able to support their cost of living. For example, in some country, the price of food suddenly up warded after the declaration of raising in gasoline price.
Secondly, the price of energy is increased, but the wage is still the same. Some producers will pass on an increase in the cost of energy to consumers by changing the price of goods and services. As a result, people will not be able to support their cost of living and this can bring to a big difference between rich and poor people. For instance, many people who are from suburb coming to work in a big city, having to rent a costly apartment, and struggling with high cost of living will be in a hard time and lost motivation on their job.
In conclusion, I am an opinion of that increasing in prices is unable to be an effective way to control the use of energy. It is because the increased price will have an effect on the cost of production and the companies will be likely to pass on the surge prices to consumers.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, second, secondly, so, still, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 43.0788530466 28% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1409.0 1977.66487455 71% => OK
No of words: 306.0 407.700716846 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.6045751634 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67244543985 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 212.727598566 67% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.464052287582 0.524837075471 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 455.4 618.680645161 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.4792898502 48.9658058833 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.642857143 100.406767564 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8571428571 20.6045352989 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.57142857143 5.45110844103 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248560850729 0.236089414692 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107002595401 0.076458572812 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102235582726 0.0737576698707 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176445034218 0.150856017488 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0757709818197 0.0645574589148 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 11.7677419355 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.4 10.9000537634 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 86.8835125448 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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