Beyong a shadow of a doubt, in the current era, watching movie has become indispensable in people’s lives. On that ground, this is because movies is a source amusement through which it does not only entertain viewers but also enlightened them. In this regard, a plathora of people possess the conviction that people should watch movies only when it contributes valuble information to them. However, others look at this concept through a different lens and contend that any form of movies is beneficial to watch for human beings. For the following paragraphs, I will delve into the most conspicuous reasons and examples justifying my stance.
The first exquisite reason to be mentioned is that Irrefitably, watching movies can help to mitigate stress level. No one can deny the fact that, nowadays, people tend to carry a lot of strees in their minds due to increasing level of work load and similary, students show stress due to higher level of competitions they face in their academics. Thefore, watching various movies can divert their thoughts to another directions which would make them revealed. To exemplify, a date statistics collected from an emperical study that is conducted at the University of california indicates that approximately 78% people prefer to watch television after coming back to home from home, no matter how tired they are. Indeed, so I do. This is the only way which can make me calm after handling a tons of work load at office. Admittedly, it is judicious to say that people can reduce their anxiety and stress by watching televsion shows.
Another noteworthy point striking in my mind is that even though some movies shows do not directly teach us about real life, they can leave indirect message intoour subconscious mind. In other words, comedy movies make us laugh, romantic movies show us how we should love with purity and high-fie shows provide information about latest techonlogy. To shed more light on this, My personal experience is a compelling example of what has been elaborated above. When I was a child I used to see numerous different kinds of documentaries. One of my favourite documentary was based on the life of Dr. APJ Abdul Kalam. He was a renowed scientist in my coutry. In real life, he was belong to poor family and with his constant hard work and persistance, he became a popular scientiest. COnsdequently, I learned many precious real life experience from his life which I implemented in my life. What’s more. his findamental thoughts tought me to never give up for the goal regardless of big obstruction we may face. Ultimately, this reinforces my belief that many forms of movies are made to teach us vital information.
To reciptulate, in spite of the fact that many people may not agree with my viewpoint, I utterly belive that watching movies have myriad of advantages. This is because it reduces our stress, and because it teaches valubale lessons in our life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, look, may, so, in other words, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.0286738351 163% => OK
Pronoun: 65.0 43.0788530466 151% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 67.0 52.1666666667 128% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2446.0 1977.66487455 124% => OK
No of words: 493.0 407.700716846 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96146044625 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.71206996034 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78098114629 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 282.0 212.727598566 133% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.57200811359 0.524837075471 109% => OK
syllable_count: 761.4 618.680645161 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.5432535433 48.9658058833 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.916666667 100.406767564 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5416666667 20.6045352989 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.04166666667 5.45110844103 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.85842293907 233% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.280000107081 0.236089414692 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0690154256538 0.076458572812 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0539430004791 0.0737576698707 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154126519618 0.150856017488 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0381316221456 0.0645574589148 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 11.7677419355 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 119.0 86.8835125448 137% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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