Choosing a career path or profession is one of the most important things in people's life. Personally, I believe in the past it was easier to determine what type of career offers you the best opportunity to be successful in the future. I feel this way for two reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
First of all, because nowadays there are more opportunities and choices than before, choosing the right career path is usually hard for people. When someone wants to decide their future career path, they should overthink about it. My personal experience is a compelling instance for this. I have graduated from high school this month, and I have already decided my future career. It was tough for me too. Because career choice brings much stress and worries. I have thought about almost everything, for example, what can my future job offer me, what is its cons and pros. Finally, I decided to continue my education with medicine field. As I said earlier, every year brings new job opportunities with itself, that is why I think it was easier to make a choice about career before.
Secondly, it is riskier than before to make a career choice nowadays. As I said in the second paragraph, every year new job opportunities appear. Therefore, people are worried about overshadowing usual opportunities by newcomer opportunities. For instance, in the 20th century technology was not developed as today. Day by day technology was developed and in the 21st century technology, science, computer science are the most dominant fields. That is why we should keep up with the times.
To sum up, I am of the opinion that it was easier to make a career choice before. This is because nowadays while choosing a career path you will come across a lot of opportunities, and it is confusing, and it is getting tougher to choose the right career path day by day with the advent of new opportunities.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, as to, for example, for instance, i feel, i think, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1577.0 1977.66487455 80% => OK
No of words: 328.0 407.700716846 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80792682927 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75628473086 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 212.727598566 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.52743902439 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 501.3 618.680645161 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.3985078578 48.9658058833 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.85 100.406767564 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4 20.6045352989 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.7 5.45110844103 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185442316068 0.236089414692 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.056254139932 0.076458572812 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0528327717553 0.0737576698707 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122366727939 0.150856017488 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.04395426249 0.0645574589148 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 11.7677419355 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.32 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.56 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 86.8835125448 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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