Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
In the past it was easier to identify what type of career or job would lead to a secure, successful future.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answe
As everything in life is like a coint that has two different slides, people must weigh th pros and cons before jumping to conculsions. After all, each and every question or topic requires careful deliberation in that there are multiple variables to a truth. Even though some may adamantly believe choosing a successful career was difficult in the past, I believe this opinion lacks coherence to some extent. In my humble opinion, In the past it was easier to choose a successful career, thereby secruing the future due to the following reasons and details.
First and foremost, with the advent of modern technology, people can't choose apropriate job. The main reason behind this rationale is that the standard of life increased, meaning that people life expenses increased rapidly. In addition to this, there are many discplines and majors in Universities around the world. Therefore, choosing major in Universities become very difficult. To illustrate more thoroughly, my friend Sami graduated from High school last year. so he was confused and stressed about choosing his major owing to the fact that there a lot of majors. Also, it's really difficult to determine majors that would lead to a successful careers. All in all, we can't and shouldn't overlook the upsides of choosing a successful career.
On top of this, people in the past were more satisfied with their careers. In the eyes of many people in present day society, people were working in anything to earn money in order to take care of their families. In other words, the life expenses weren't that much so choosing a career was easier. In contrast, nowadays parent required to save money to pay for Universities and schools, which costs a lot. A great example of this would be my grandfather was a farmer and he was able to take care of ten children's besides, their mother. meaning that choosing a career that woulld secure your children future was easier. Long story short, it's clear as day to me people were more satisfined with their jobs in the past.
In summation, yes, it's virtually impossible to provide a complete satisfying answer to an open-ended question. Although the jury may be out in this given essay, we can come to a mutual agreement that in the past it was easier to identify a successful career that would lead to secure job due to the following reasons and details mentioned above.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: can't; cannot
...the advent of modern technology, people cant choose apropriate job. The main reason ...
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Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to major'
Suggestion: to major
...s around the world. Therefore, choosing major in Universities become very difficult. ...
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Suggestion: So
...i graduated from High school last year. so he was confused and stressed about choo...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'career'?
Suggestion: career
... majors that would lead to a successful careers. All in all, we cant and shouldnt overl...
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Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...to a successful careers. All in all, we cant and shouldnt overlook the upsides of ch...
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...essful careers. All in all, we cant and shouldnt overlook the upsides of choosing a succ...
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Suggestion: weren't
...lies. In other words, the life expenses werent that much so choosing a career was easi...
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...t much so choosing a career was easier. In contrast, nowadays parent required to s...
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Suggestion: Meaning
...of ten childrens besides, their mother. meaning that choosing a career that woulld secu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, if, look, may, really, so, therefore, after all, in addition, in contrast, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 68.0 52.1666666667 130% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1971.0 1977.66487455 100% => OK
No of words: 403.0 407.700716846 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89081885856 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48049772903 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6170932497 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545905707196 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 612.0 618.680645161 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.94265232975 223% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.6393219001 48.9658058833 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.8571428571 100.406767564 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1904761905 20.6045352989 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.28571428571 5.45110844103 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21568518418 0.236089414692 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0620207273872 0.076458572812 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0689868148796 0.0737576698707 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141281497022 0.150856017488 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0394785140873 0.0645574589148 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 11.7677419355 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 86.8835125448 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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