Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
If people have the opportunity to get a secure job, they should take it right away rather than wait for a job that would be more satisfying.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer
As everything in life is like a coin people must weigh the pros and cons before jumping to conclusions. After all, each and every topic or question requires a careful deliberation in that there are multiple variable to a truth. Even though some may adamantly believe individuals should wait for satistying job even, if they have the chance to get a secure job, I believe such opinion lacks coherence to some extent. In my humble opinion, I believe people should take any opportunity to get a job due to the following reasons and details.
First and formost, because of the rapid development of the world in present days people should secure themselves in jobs and doing so can engender a myriad of advantages. The main reason behind this rationale is that there are a lot of people graduate everyday, which maybe will more qualified that others. In addition to this, most people are looking for jobs in well-known companies rather than other companies, even if they will get less money. To illustrate more thoroughly, My friend Ahmad last year graduate from Philadlephi University in Jordan. However, he couldn't find a satisfying job for two months. So he started looking for any job in order to secure his daily expenses, which are arount 20$. Furthermore, my dad started searching for a job for Ahmad and eventually he found a job in computer company, which would secure his expenses. Although Ahmad thought he will stuch in this job for a long time, he was able to find more satisfying job within six months owing to the fact that he got a good expeience in his field by working with that compnay. All in all, we can't and shouldn't overlook the upsides of taking any job right away rather than waiting to get a better job.
On top of this, wating for a long time to get a job can result in unfavorable ramification. In the eyes of many people in present day society, graduate student should get a trained course related to their field. Meaning that, these students will not lose the informations they got from the University. On the other hand, many people just wailt untill they get an excellent job in a big compnay. subsequently, this chance may not be given for this kind of people because they are fresh graduate and don't have the enough knowledge and experience to work there. In other words, fresh graduate students need to work at any compnay realted to their feild to get the needed experience in order to get satisfying job. A great example of this would be My friend Jack who didn't sleep at home after he graduated. he started taking coursed in big companies to raise his knowledge , also getting some experience from that. Therfore, he was able to find a satisfying job in Mircosoft as software development. Long story short, it's clear as day to me waiting for satisfying job can be detrimental.
In summation, yes, it's virtually impossible to provide a completely satisfying answer to an open-ended question. Although the jury may be out in this given essay, we can come to a mutual agreement that if people have the opportunity to get a secure job, they should take it rather than waiting to get a better job due to the reasons and details mentioned above
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, however, if, look, may, so, well, after all, in addition, kind of, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 9.8082437276 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 43.0788530466 118% => OK
Preposition: 75.0 52.1666666667 144% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2622.0 1977.66487455 133% => OK
No of words: 558.0 407.700716846 137% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69892473118 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.86024933743 4.48103885553 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6215614151 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 272.0 212.727598566 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.487455197133 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 819.0 618.680645161 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.51792114695 227% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.94265232975 202% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.8952211791 48.9658058833 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.88 100.406767564 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.32 20.6045352989 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.04 5.45110844103 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.5376344086 217% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 20.0 11.8709677419 168% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.38589726023 0.236089414692 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109094699403 0.076458572812 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0793430026236 0.0737576698707 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.257364851559 0.150856017488 171% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0393762982154 0.0645574589148 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 11.7677419355 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.28 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 86.8835125448 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 30 minutes.
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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