Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Educating children is a more difficult task today than it was in the past because they spend so much time on cell phone, online games, and social networking Web site.
As everything in life is like a coin that has two different sides, people must weigh the cons and pros before jumping to conclusions. After all, each and every question or topic requires a careful deliberation in that there are always multiple variables to a truth. Even though some may adamantly believe the advent of modern technology made it easier for children's to learn, I believe such an opinion lacks coherence to some extent. In my humble opinion, children education has become a really difficult task than were before owing to the fact that there are a lot of distractions, such as online games and social media.
First and foremost, online games and social media, such as Facebook are really making the education process of children very difficult. The main reason behind this rationale is that students have become distracted. In other words, online game requires careful attention from the children. children should monitor their online games all the time in order to collect prizes. In additon to this, the rapid development of the soceities made the soical media websites are really essential. Children's and even adult's created soical media accounts. Also, they are checking their accounts everytime. To illustrate more throroughly, My little sister, Sara, is studying at Jordan School. However, her academic level was great last year. suddenly, I got a call from school to discuss some issue with the decline of Sara academic level. Furthermore, I went to the school and talked to the adminstor. As a result, I found out that my sister is keep checking her social meda alll the day instead of studying. Also, she strated playing online game that is called Fortnie. Subsequently, I talked with her and gave her some pieces of advices. after that the school called me again, to tell that Sara conditions is backed to normal. All in all, we can't and shouldn't overlook the upsides of preventing children from playing and staying on the internet web sites all the day.
On top of this, young people learning was more easier in that past. In the eyes of many people in present-day society, people in the past were more concentrated in studying. meaning that they would study without having other things to do. their lives were simple, there are no much things to do. Therefore, children education would have been easier. A great example of this would be my father, had told me that when he was a child in the school. he used to study from three to four hours everyday. However, I was surprised because children in these days can't study that much. So, I asked him to tell what have changed? and he said even with the modern technology that is supposed to make the study easier. It has flaws, children started following these flaws instead of using the technology in the right way. For instance, children didn't use their tablets to read books or watching educational youtube. Long story short, it's clear as day to me that children are using the technology in wrong way, which can be detrimental.
In summation, yes, it's virtually impossible to provide a completely satisfying answer to an open-ended question. Although the jury may be out in this given essay, we can come to mutual agreement that Educating children is more difficult than it was before due to the following reasons and details mentioned above.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, however, if, look, may, really, so, therefore, after all, for instance, such as, as a result, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 15.1003584229 179% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 58.0 43.0788530466 135% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 77.0 52.1666666667 148% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2762.0 1977.66487455 140% => OK
No of words: 565.0 407.700716846 139% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88849557522 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.87542086881 4.48103885553 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53088681082 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 297.0 212.727598566 140% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.525663716814 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 854.1 618.680645161 138% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 18.0 9.59856630824 188% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.94265232975 202% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 35.0 20.6003584229 170% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.7095938116 48.9658058833 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.9142857143 100.406767564 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1428571429 20.6045352989 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.82857142857 5.45110844103 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.5376344086 253% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 13.0 4.88709677419 266% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22187499239 0.236089414692 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0478018517183 0.076458572812 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0443839011285 0.0737576698707 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123737787929 0.150856017488 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0254057327067 0.0645574589148 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 10.9000537634 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 128.0 86.8835125448 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 30 minutes.
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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