the reading passage and lecture have conflicting opinions about Cheavalier memoir. The article strongly postulates that there is a doubt about his memoir. However, to make his life appear more exciting he created events in his memoir that doesn't exist. On the other hand, the listening adamantly delinates that Cheavalier memoir is accurate and precise.f
First and foremost, according to the author of the excerpt, Cheavalier wasted a lot of money on parties and gambling in switzerland. Moreover, he was a rich man.Nonetheless, the lecture offsets these informations by declaring that spending a lot of money on parties and gampling requires to sell his property. Inaddition, he needs days to get the money.
The professor in the listening farther points out that he wrote down the coversations every night. Also, it was preserved for years. These claims refute the writer implications of the accuracy of the conversations that was written in the memoir.
the article lastly points out that by making ,Cheavalier was able to escpae from notorious prison. which is located in Italy. The speaker in the lecture counter these indications by insisting that celling was prepared very well. Also, more power is required to escape.
the reading passage and lecture have conflicting opinions about Cheavalier memoir. The article strongly postulates that there is a doubt about his memoir. However, to make his life appear more exciting he created events in his memoir that doesn't exist. On the other hand, the listening adamantly delinates that Cheavalier memoir is accurate and precise.f
First and foremost, according to the author of the excerpt, Cheavalier wasted a lot of money on parties and gambling in switzerland. Moreover, he was a rich man.Nonetheless, the lecture offsets these informations by declaring that spending a lot of money on parties and gampling requires to sell his property. Inaddition, he needs days to get the money.
The professor in the listening farther points out that he wrote down the coversations every night. Also, it was preserved for years. These claims refute the writer implications of the accuracy of the conversations that was written in the memoir.
the article lastly points out that by making ,Cheavalier was able to escpae from notorious prison. which is located in Italy. The speaker in the lecture counter these indications by insisting that celling was prepared very well. Also, more power is required to escape.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
the reading passage and lecture have confli...
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Line 1, column 240, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...ng he created events in his memoir that doesnt exist. On the other hand, the listening...
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Line 2, column 162, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Nonetheless
...witzerland. Moreover, he was a rich man.Nonetheless, the lecture offsets these informations...
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Line 2, column 289, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'selling'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'require' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: selling
... money on parties and gampling requires to sell his property. Inaddition, he needs days...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
...ations that was written in the memoir. the article lastly points out that by makin...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...article lastly points out that by making ,Cheavalier was able to escpae from notor...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Which
...s able to escpae from notorious prison. which is located in Italy. The speaker in the...
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Line 4, column 99, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “which” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...s able to escpae from notorious prison. which is located in Italy. The speaker in the...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...lso, more power is required to escape.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, lastly, moreover, nonetheless, so, well, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.4613686534 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 5.04856512141 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 7.30242825607 68% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 12.0772626932 75% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 22.412803532 89% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 30.3222958057 96% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 5.01324503311 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1039.0 1373.03311258 76% => OK
No of words: 198.0 270.72406181 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24747474747 5.08290768461 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 4.04702891845 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84207046968 2.5805825403 110% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 145.348785872 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.590909090909 0.540411800872 109% => OK
syllable_count: 319.5 419.366225166 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 3.25607064018 123% => OK
Article: 7.0 8.23620309051 85% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 13.0662251656 99% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 21.2450331126 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 56.616325243 49.2860985944 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.9230769231 110.228320801 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2307692308 21.698381199 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.46153846154 7.06452816374 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 4.19205298013 215% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 4.33554083885 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.27373068433 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.456671409314 0.272083759551 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.156261894012 0.0996497079465 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.206896351655 0.0662205650399 312% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.252586208854 0.162205337803 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.313516366912 0.0443174109184 707% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.3589403974 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 53.8541721854 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.0289183223 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.58 12.2367328918 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.42419426049 107% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 63.6247240618 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.7273730684 103% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.498013245 76% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.2008830022 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.5 Out of 30
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