Nowadays, in order to survive the current economic climate, everyone in the family is supposed to work from dawn to dusk. Finding a favorite position matching to our major seems difficult in the modern era. Many people adhere to view that they should wait for their desirable job and position, while others believe that this may make the situation hard for living, we should create the situation suitable for ourselves. Ego, when it comes to my stance, by weighing up the pros and cons, I firmly hold that people should accept the secure job rather than waiting for their suitable job. In what follows, I will cogently pinpoint my most conspicuous reasons to justify my point of view.
The first exquisite point to be mentioned is that experiencing new and different things will encourage us to annihilate the brittle. Most of us do not accept new things in our live, but they may be our key of success in our future life. For instance; one of my friends accustomed to write story for films and she would like to work as a director in the film studio, but she could not find her favorite job. Therefore, she started working as reporter in news paper. On that time she realized that she is very successful in this field, even though once a job by the title of film director, was proposed to her, she reacted that.
Another equally significant point to be mentioned is that accepting new job opportunities help us to go forward a brilliant future. I mean when we start working in some well-known offices, albeit it is not our favorite position, it can help us to find our suitable job. I want sheet some light on the point that I have just mentioned. My classmate which her major was agriculture, started working as a finance in a popular institute. She started communicating with people and after one year passed, a very good position based on her relationship proposed to her. Now working in her major and is very satisfy from her scenario.
In brief, contemplating all the aforementioned reasons, I definitely think that people should not reject the work opportunities, which are supposed to them. By this circumstance they could easily work on the situation to find it amazing for themselves. In one word, everything has the worth of trying.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 453, Rule ID: NEWS_PAPER[1]
Message: Did you mean 'newspaper'? This word sequence is usually spelled together.
Suggestion: newspaper
...ore, she started working as reporter in news paper. On that time she realized that she is ...
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Line 4, column 236, Rule ID: HELP_TO_FIND[1]
Message: This phrase is probably grammatically incorrect. Write 'help us find' instead.
Suggestion: help us find
...it is not our favorite position, it can help us to find our suitable job. I want sheet some lig...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, so, therefore, well, while, for instance, i mean, in brief
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 62.0 43.0788530466 144% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1859.0 1977.66487455 94% => OK
No of words: 392.0 407.700716846 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74234693878 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44960558625 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6752688581 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 212.727598566 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.52806122449 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 578.7 618.680645161 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.9350472522 48.9658058833 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.8421052632 100.406767564 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6315789474 20.6045352989 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.15789473684 5.45110844103 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19160695042 0.236089414692 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0522109634857 0.076458572812 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0584289513527 0.0737576698707 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111674956511 0.150856017488 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.04911901478 0.0645574589148 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 11.7677419355 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 86.8835125448 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.002688172 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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