Due to hustle and bustle of life, people are struggling with different affairs nowadays. Prohibitions, technology, life style, rivalry and many different aspects make people aggressive and mad. People are experiencing dire consequences of warfare which certainly has dramatic effects on economic, social lives of people. Personally, I believe that people are not happy of their lives than people in the past. I feel this way for two reasons that I will explore in the following essay.
First of all, in order to survive the current economic climate, people are working dawn to dusk and owing to their hectic daily schedule which makes them overwhelmed and exhausted. Therefore, people do not feel gladness of their lives. My father experience is a compelling example of this. Since I remember my father, he is always busy. He is teeming with an ample amount of work to afford our expenditure. Therefore, never does he enjoy his life. On the other hand, my grandfather, he is like a pristine guy who never undergone any struggles because in those generation there was not such bad economic situation. As a result, my father experiences predicaments to prevail this regrettable situation.
Secondly, people are now educated and their goals are their priority. Hence, they are consistently exploring new ways and novel opportunities to be prized and famous. People lost the real life meaning which is (happiness itself), therefore, they always tend to reach something to be delight. For example, my sister is the one who really lost the real meaning of life. She studies more than required scope. For this reason, she cannot readily sleep, eat or even enjoy any party; moreover, she is always stressful about her exams, future, goals, and competitors. Eventually, she passes one exam or achieves one goal; however, consecutively makes another goal to put her in stress.
Finally, I am of this opinion that nowadays people are not as happy as past people. I think this way because people are now struggling dare economic situation and the prices are unaffordable and because they forget to enjoy the life itself, hence they are searching for reason to make them happy not the happiness itself.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 140, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT
Message: Use simply 'many'.
...ns, technology, life style, rivalry and many different aspects make people aggressive and mad....
Line 2, column 554, Rule ID: THIS_NNS
Message: Did you mean 'this generation' or 'those generations'?
Suggestion: this generation; those generations
...ever undergone any struggles because in those generation there was not such bad economic situati...
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, hence, however, if, moreover, really, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, i feel, i think, as a result, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 47.0 43.0788530466 109% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 52.1666666667 69% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1830.0 1977.66487455 93% => OK
No of words: 361.0 407.700716846 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06925207756 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35889894354 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72365242799 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576177285319 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 587.7 618.680645161 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 9.59856630824 177% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.8545023175 48.9658058833 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.1818181818 100.406767564 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4090909091 20.6045352989 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.31818181818 5.45110844103 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.85842293907 259% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193364823192 0.236089414692 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0599772342718 0.076458572812 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0631767957191 0.0737576698707 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12900129651 0.150856017488 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0582547408467 0.0645574589148 90% => OK
automated_readability_index: 10.7 11.7677419355 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 58.1214874552 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.83 10.9000537634 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 86.8835125448 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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