Youths are considered to be the best and most impressive people who can provide society with sweeping changes in the future. Every society is affected by its young people's decisions and functions. In every community, youths are the only members of the society who want to bring changes and have the opportunity of alteration. Personally, I believe that youths are the most effective part of the society who always changes the society's future by their decisions. I feel this way for two reasons that I will explore in the following.
First of all, youths decisions appears to be effective when they tend to improve by their education, So, educated youth is the most reliable person to decide about the society because he uses his knowledge and no one can refuses the knowledge of youngster whose knowledge is pristine and fresh. Furthermore, have access to many other technological sources to empower the decision. My uncle’s experiment is a compelling example of this. He is a fulbrighter, he could appeal people by his knowledge to vote him in a position to the government. So, he got the position and exploited his knowledge to make the most important decisions for society. As a result, the knowledge of a youth leads a bright future of a society.
Secondly, youngsters influence the society more than anyone else because they are the most impressionable adolescent due to hectic situation of a community. So, they become vigorous to bring a sweeping change because they do not want the next generation o undergo the same situation. Ultimately, after the youngsters become powerful and ambitious there is no hurdle to their effective decision. For example; I am the one who really suffered the hustle and bustle of the society. I studied hard during the university and worked from dawn to dust to bring a principal alter to the scenario. As a result I am the Provincial agriculture, irrigation and livestock director of my city which can control agricultural situation of my society.
Finally, I am of the opinion that young people have the most impressive decisions on the society because they are the new generation and have better and fresh knowledge of everything and because the unfavorable situation made them vigorous to have an effective role.
- TPO-30 - Integrated Writing Task 80
- TOEFL T P O 32 - Integrated Writing Task 3
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?In order to be well-informed, a person must get information from many different news sources. 76
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? To improve the quality of education, universities should spend money on salaries university professors. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 66
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?It is better for children to choose jobs that are similar to their parents’ jobs than to choose jobs that are very different from their parents’ job.Use specific reasons and examples to support you 76
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 222, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'refuse'
...se he uses his knowledge and no one can refuses the knowledge of youngster whose knowle...
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, furthermore, really, second, secondly, so, for example, i feel, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 43.0788530466 77% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1886.0 1977.66487455 95% => OK
No of words: 377.0 407.700716846 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00265251989 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4064143971 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90016632058 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 212.727598566 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.490716180371 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 621.0 618.680645161 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.3914026635 48.9658058833 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.777777778 100.406767564 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9444444444 20.6045352989 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.83333333333 5.45110844103 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136521410674 0.236089414692 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0456453409353 0.076458572812 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0406104034455 0.0737576698707 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0909975308317 0.150856017488 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0433857514042 0.0645574589148 67% => OK
automated_readability_index: 12.6 11.7677419355 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 10.9000537634 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 86.8835125448 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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