Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
In the past it was easier to identify what type of career or job would lead to a secure, successful future.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Some people may think that it was easier to figure out a job that is secure and successful in the past. Personally, I believe that this is not true. There are several reasons why I feel this way, which I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, the information about the job or career is an important thing when identifying it, which is usually not available in the past. The information, such as reward, working environment, or future directions, is really important when identifying the future of the job. However, without the Internet or cellphone, one can not access too much information about the desired job in the past. In modern society, it is very convenient for one person to find related information about a career or job. One can just utilize a search engine, Google or Baidu, to search for the desired information. By obtaining this useful information, one can easily and thoroughly investigate the current development or the future directions of a job.
Furthermore, we have more chances to try for the most suitable job for ourselves nowadays. With the development of technology and the improvement of society, it is easier for us to change our job when feeling unsuitable or uncomfortable. The most important thing behind this is that we can never know the future of a job until we personally get involved in it. My personal experience is a compelling example of this. Before I entered university, I once worked as an assistant teacher at a math school. I thought it was easy to teach math because of my excellent math grade. However, when a really stood in the class and started to teach math, I realize that it is much more difficult for me to explain a math problem clearly and perfectly, rather than just solve it.
Admittedly, there are fewer careers in the past, and as a result, it is easy to find a job within this limited amount of jobs. However, this also means one has fewer job options and it may be difficult for one to choose a suitable job that leads to a secure and successful future.
In conclusion, I strongly feel that it was harder to find a job that is secure and successful in the past.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, may, really, so, i feel, in conclusion, such as, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1770.0 1977.66487455 89% => OK
No of words: 379.0 407.700716846 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67018469657 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41224685777 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77975319021 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 212.727598566 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.474934036939 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 570.6 618.680645161 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.0801219845 48.9658058833 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.1578947368 100.406767564 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9473684211 20.6045352989 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.63157894737 5.45110844103 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211139462362 0.236089414692 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0701193236391 0.076458572812 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0590695252606 0.0737576698707 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139851231592 0.150856017488 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.040576429188 0.0645574589148 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 11.7677419355 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 10.9000537634 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 86.8835125448 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.