Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People are never satisfied with what they have; they always want something more or something different. Use specific reasons to support your answer.

Human beings have very complex nature. Whatever they have will not remain attractive after some time and they started to look something new. I agree with this statement that people never satisfied what they have and always want something more and different. I feel this way for two main reasons which I will explore in the following essay.

To begin with people can’t stick and stay for long time with same things because they get bored and become stagnant and this will cause frustration. Human beings have a nature to explore new horizon and want to know whatever they have and don’t have. In this technological world science is giving us new technologies day after day and people wants to adopt new technology for change. My own experience has a good example of this. Around two years back, I bought Samsung smart phone and was very happy to buy it. I spend my all pocket money for buying that phone. My all friends were excited to see my mobile phone. But after sometime I was bored with the same device and at the same time Q Mobile introduce a new smart phone LT 700 pro with new features and applications and considerable memory storage. Then I thought I should buy new phone. I want something new and different, I want to kept updating my phone. From this I experienced change spread colors in your life.

Furthermore, this is the world of competition. The one who will not run with advanced life, life will not hold that person.
To compete with life, one should use all necessary tools of this advanced age. No matter what is the age, just the spirit of change and update yourself with this new world. As I said above this is the technological world and everything has going upgrade. The person who will update himself may compete in any situation. For example one of my grandfather's friend was working in administration department. It was the time when manual work was converting to computerize. That person was highly interested to learn computer working. Not only grand father's friend but everyone was excited on this change. They discuss the advantages of this computerized work that how this change will help to coordinate and compete with other advanced companies.

In conclusion I strongly believe that people always want something more and different. Because it helps to avoid you to get bored and stagnant and secondly change helps to run fast with this technological world.

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Average: 4.3 (7 votes)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 315, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'technologies'' or 'technology's'?
Suggestion: technologies'; technology's
...ological world science is giving us new technologies day after day and people wants to adopt...
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Line 3, column 708, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (Mobile) must be used with a third-person verb: 'introduces'.
Suggestion: introduces
...me device and at the same time Q Mobile introduce a new smart phone LT 700 pro with new f...
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'furthermore', 'if', 'look', 'may', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'then', 'for example', 'i feel', 'in conclusion', 'to begin with']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.201312910284 0.229887763892 88% => OK
Verbs: 0.194748358862 0.158761421928 123% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0984682713348 0.0866891130778 114% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0393873085339 0.046263068375 85% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0722100656455 0.0685040099705 105% => OK
Prepositions: 0.089715536105 0.118717715034 76% => OK
Participles: 0.0306345733042 0.0351676179071 87% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.57442562442 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0328227571116 0.0309702414327 106% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0787746170678 0.0887237588012 89% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0240700218818 0.0209618222197 115% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0218818380744 0.0139019557991 157% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2411.0 2387.08602151 101% => OK
No of words: 415.0 408.028673835 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.80963855422 5.86048508987 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51348521516 4.48200974243 101% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.318072289157 0.338922669872 94% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.207228915663 0.251872472559 82% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.139759036145 0.174417080927 80% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0963855421687 0.112833075102 85% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57442562442 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.501204819277 0.524397521467 96% => OK
Word variations: 55.5700699605 59.2087087015 94% => OK
How many sentences: 28.0 20.6684587814 135% => OK
Sentence length: 14.8214285714 20.5533526081 72% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.2741123184 48.84282405 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.1071428571 120.699889404 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8214285714 20.5533526081 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.464285714286 0.644075263715 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.54480286738 36% => OK
Readability: 35.5443201377 45.7405998639 78% => OK
Elegance: 1.05 1.45489161554 72% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240143992968 0.300154397459 80% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0994340376514 0.103427244359 96% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0778893961903 0.0752933317313 103% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.416488424586 0.497263757937 84% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.158061992379 0.151897553556 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0764282864614 0.114077575197 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0903395888667 0.0781384742642 116% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.279925442931 0.336927656856 83% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.122569466099 0.067059652881 183% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173148791142 0.210909579961 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103626224739 0.0618886996521 167% => OK

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8870967742 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.86379928315 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.91756272401 183% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 14.0 8.42114695341 166% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 2.4623655914 162% => OK
Neutral topic words: 6.0 2.75985663082 217% => OK
Total topic words: 24.0 13.6433691756 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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