Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
People who develop many different skills are more successful than people who focus on one skill only.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In the modern era, people's lives have become more complex than before. As a result, the necessity of developing many skills has raised a lot of debate among people. Some may hold the opinion that it is really awkward to remain in an excellent standard in different skills. Thus, they prefer to concentrate on one particular skill and learn all the different aspects it represents. However, other people may take the opposite viewpoint and believe that developing more than just one skill can help us be competent enough as the labor market is changing frequently. I personally incline toward the latter opinion. In the following paragraphs, I will elaborate on my viewpoint through some notable reasons.
My first reason and maybe the most important one is that as I have mentioned, life is quite complicated today and we cannot stay successful by learning only one particular skill. By introducing new technology, a market can completely collapse and another one may replace it. It is likely that a few years later, for example, robots serve many functions people do today, Thus, many people may lose their jobs and they should essentially look for menial jobs to survive. In my opinion, mastering many skills gives us the opportunity to have more chances to make money out of such an elaborate labor market. It allows people to adapt easily to different circumstances and make good decisions in the case of any changes in their environment. If we do not anticipate these possible changes, they will pose a serious threat to our life.
My second reason is that people who have learned many skills are generally who are willing to accept risks in their lives. They are eager to deal with challenges and have a positive attitude towards changes. Over time, this will inculcate a sense of self-confidence in them, which is directly related to their productivity and can boost their performance compared to those who prefer to continue with only one skill. Not only does mastering many skills and abilities can directly make people adaptable to the unstable nature of the labor market, but also it raises their self-confidence, which is a fundamental key to success.
Lastly, people who have many skills can impress other people too. When other people see someone versatile who is able to handle various challenges in different areas, they will trust them easily. Employees with many skills are among the sought-after ones wanted by many employers, who are willing to hire and retain them at any cost.
In summary, based on the aforementioned arguments, there are many reasons that convince me to support the idea of developing many skills to remain successful. Some reasons are mentioned above. However, that was like a story in a nutshell. Actually, there are other ideas and examples challenging this claim, which are not mentioned above. All in all, I firmly believe that nowadays people need to learn many skills to improve their performance.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 175, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'holds'.
Suggestion: holds
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, however, if, lastly, look, may, really, second, so, thus, for example, in summary, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.0286738351 163% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 43.0788530466 109% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 52.1666666667 119% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2460.0 1977.66487455 124% => OK
No of words: 491.0 407.700716846 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01018329939 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.70728369723 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70586188877 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 260.0 212.727598566 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.529531568228 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 796.5 618.680645161 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.758080356 48.9658058833 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.4 100.406767564 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.64 20.6045352989 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.48 5.45110844103 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.382495454014 0.236089414692 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101133837401 0.076458572812 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0730853148476 0.0737576698707 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.22419849921 0.150856017488 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0369740376456 0.0645574589148 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 11.7677419355 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 10.9000537634 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 122.0 86.8835125448 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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