Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Playing sports teaches people important lessons about life.
Nowadays, almost all people including all aged play sports. Moreover, people often say that playing sports teaches people significant lessens about their life. However, it is so controversial that people are able to gain important ideas about their habitats. In my view, people can acquire knowledge of their life by playing sports. These sports give people adaptation for society, communication skills, management for their goals.
People can adapt to society through sports. When they play some sport, they are able to sportsmanship such as manner, greeting, and esteem. In particular, young people should earn these ideas through sports. Nowadays, society criticizes young people that they do not have common sense because they are using their smartphones in dine time and cannot greeting with their teachers, and take polite attitudes toward people who are older than them. However, young people are able to gain a common sense for adjusting society if they join some sports team.
Some sports make people more communicative persons. In sports, people have many opportunities to make conversation with some people. For example, one person joins in pickup games of basketball near his house. In the games, he has to communicate with his teammates because he has the confidence to take a better shot than his teammates. From this situation, his communication skills will be gradually improved through these games.
Management skills for the goals of people can be brushed by sports. While people play sports, they often set up their goals. For instance, one girl has the dream to be one of the starters in her college, but she does not have enough credence from her coach to play a starter. One day, she came up with the idea that she has to be the expert of defense. As a result, she endeavored to achieve her goal by arduous workouts every day after team practice was just finished. This mindset will be helpful in their future.
To sum up, I surely believe that people can learn crucial lectures for their life by playing sports. It is so beneficial for them to accommodate society, make better communication skills, manage their goals.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, moreover, so, while, as to, for example, for instance, in particular, such as, as a result, in my view, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 13.8261648746 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1800.0 1977.66487455 91% => OK
No of words: 354.0 407.700716846 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08474576271 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33761313653 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56411917437 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 212.727598566 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.525423728814 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 540.9 618.680645161 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.3220494873 48.9658058833 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.2608695652 100.406767564 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3913043478 20.6045352989 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.69565217391 5.45110844103 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20935603547 0.236089414692 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0712600992371 0.076458572812 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0674768683342 0.0737576698707 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122805044841 0.150856017488 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0777795416814 0.0645574589148 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 11.7677419355 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 58.1214874552 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.1575268817 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 10.9000537634 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 86.8835125448 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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