here is not shortage of debate about whether people should sometimes lie in order to maintain relationships with the others. In my opinion, always being honest is still a better option in terms of building healthy relationships. I feel this ways for two reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
First of all, when people tell lies, the consequences of being found out by the others are even worse than telling the harsh truths in the first place. If a person lies to the others, and these people trust wholeheartedly what he says, he will have to lie another time to cover up for the first lie so as not to disappoint them. As a result the lies will keep piling up, to the point where he can not hide anymore. Eventually, the others will know that they have been lied to and their relationships are not only hurt, but ruined totally. My experience is a compelling example of this. Last month, one of my friends asked me if I thought his singing was good. In order not to hurt his feelings, I told him that he had a nice voice, and he truly believed that he did. Then, every time he sang, I praised him a lot so that he would not be disappointed, and he was even more certain that his singing was actually great. One time he went to a karaoke bar with his friends, they told him that his voice was terrible, and he was so hurt that he stayed silent all that time. After that, our friendship ended because he thought that I told lies because I enjoyed seeing him embarass himself, and no excuses can compensate for thing I did to him. These lies, which I told for good intentions, ruined our relationships in the worst way possible.
Secondly, telling the truth politely gives people opportunities to reflect on their shortcomings and find ways to improve them. When told the unpleasant truths, people may feel embarassed just for some time, but they will soon realize that these truths are the honest feedback of the others and that they can progress a lot from such feedback. The sooner people understand that the reality is harsh, the easier it will be for them to face it in the future. For instance, my brother once asked me what I thought of his body. I honestly told him that he was fat, and he was unhappy after I said so. But later, by becoming brave enough to acknowledge the harsh truth that he was not fit, he started to feel motivated to change himself. If I had not told him the truth, he would have not been able to do such a thing.
In conclusion, I believe that people should always tell the truth in order to make their relationships with the others strong. This is because the results of lying are detrimental and telling the truth can help people directly face their shortcomings and improve them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, first, honestly, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, then, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, as a result, first of all, in my opinion, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 15.1003584229 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 21.0 11.0286738351 190% => OK
Pronoun: 91.0 43.0788530466 211% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2238.0 1977.66487455 113% => OK
No of words: 501.0 407.700716846 123% => OK
Chars per words: 4.46706586826 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.73107062784 4.48103885553 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47124328997 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 237.0 212.727598566 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.473053892216 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 668.7 618.680645161 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 9.0 1.86738351254 482% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.823333871 48.9658058833 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.3043478261 100.406767564 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7826086957 20.6045352989 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.52173913043 5.45110844103 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0697106127957 0.236089414692 30% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0262520267764 0.076458572812 34% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0329830544876 0.0737576698707 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.067996944348 0.150856017488 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0321108821245 0.0645574589148 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 11.7677419355 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.54 58.1214874552 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.1575268817 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.65 10.9000537634 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.95 8.01818996416 87% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 86.8835125448 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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