Our education is one of the most important part of our lifes. It usually determines our future job and our position in the society that we live in. Some people think in order to improve the quality of teachers performances, they should be paid according to how much their students learn. Others disagree. I concur with the second group. In my view, this won't affect the performance of the teachers in a good way and in some situations it is unfair.
First, it is not easy and almost imposiable to know how much students learn from their teachers. The only way to evaluate the knowledge of students...
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 57, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
... easy and almost imposiable to know how much students learn from their teachers. The...
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Line 3, column 223, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ew, the grades that a student gets from a exam is affected by many factors, and i...
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Line 5, column 117, Rule ID: BECAUSE_OF_I[1]
Message: Probable usage error. Use 'because he' instead.
Suggestion: because he
...le, I had this friend named Koosha, and because of he was poor he went to a low rated school....
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Line 5, column 201, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: and
...d school. But since he was a very smart and and self dependent, he was better than me e...
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'first', 'if', 'second', 'so', 'for example', 'i think', 'in my view', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.19028340081 0.229887763892 83% => OK
Verbs: 0.15991902834 0.158761421928 101% => OK
Adjectives: 0.080971659919 0.0866891130778 93% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0485829959514 0.046263068375 105% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0991902834008 0.0685040099705 145% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.123481781377 0.118717715034 104% => OK
Participles: 0.0242914979757 0.0351676179071 69% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.41594998926 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0242914979757 0.0309702414327 78% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0890688259109 0.0887237588012 100% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0101214574899 0.0209618222197 48% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0101214574899 0.0139019557991 73% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2343.0 2387.08602151 98% => OK
No of words: 428.0 408.028673835 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.47429906542 5.86048508987 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.548423998 4.48200974243 101% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.296728971963 0.338922669872 88% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.21261682243 0.251872472559 84% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.135514018692 0.174417080927 78% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0817757009346 0.112833075102 72% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41594998926 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 212.727598566 91% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.453271028037 0.524397521467 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 49.3654237774 59.2087087015 83% => OK
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6684587814 116% => OK
Sentence length: 17.8333333333 20.5533526081 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.3420789501 48.84282405 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.625 120.699889404 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8333333333 20.5533526081 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.375 0.644075263715 58% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.54480286738 72% => OK
Readability: 39.0950155763 45.7405998639 85% => OK
Elegance: 1.09868421053 1.45489161554 76% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262571537517 0.300154397459 87% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.127552937079 0.103427244359 123% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0923711760063 0.0752933317313 123% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.49799301804 0.497263757937 100% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.15787735996 0.151897553556 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103691808313 0.114077575197 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0740187188737 0.0781384742642 95% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.31712810689 0.336927656856 94% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.148816977987 0.067059652881 222% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170207852781 0.210909579961 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0555919853331 0.0618886996521 90% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8870967742 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.86379928315 233% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.91756272401 122% => OK
Positive topic words: 8.0 8.42114695341 95% => OK
Negative topic words: 7.0 2.4623655914 284% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.75985663082 109% => OK
Total topic words: 18.0 13.6433691756 132% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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