Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Travel is important for Personal development.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your response.
In my opinion, traveling is a vital event for everyone’s life especially for personal development, internally as well as externally. Therefore, I do agree with the statement that “travel is important for personal development”.
The first point I would like to make is that some people feel that traveling is full of danger; however, others feel that it helps us to improve our self-esteem beyond what we are now. For example, the administration of schools organizes tour-guide every semester for their students, with the aim to improve their students’ skills and increase their confidence to avoid such self-deprecation in the future.
Another point I would like to make is that many think that traveling need more planning and it consumes more time, while other think that traveling is good for global awareness; for instance, traveling to any new places or new countries make the visitors more curious to know more about it. And it makes the opportunity to see their cultures and costumes. Testing new food in different locations is always likable. Because every location has its recipes. And preparing in their own style.
Besides that, traveling not only improves self-esteem and global awareness but also inspires us to think big. To illustrate this, traveling to modern countries and seeing their evolution especially big malls, transportation facilities, and fancy restaurants. While seeing this rapid development staring their visitors’ visions. And it creates sparks in visitors’ minds to make their countries like those countries.
In conclusion, traveling is essential for everyone’s life, and it expands our personal development in three ways: improving self-esteem, increasing global awareness, and it inspires us to think big.
Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 415, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... different locations is always likable. Because every location has its recipes. And pre...
^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 259, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...tion facilities, and fancy restaurants. While seeing this rapid development staring t...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, however, if, so, therefore, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 52.1666666667 58% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1489.0 1977.66487455 75% => OK
No of words: 272.0 407.700716846 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.47426470588 4.8611393121 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.48103885553 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06842164591 2.67179642975 115% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 212.727598566 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.580882352941 0.524837075471 111% => OK
syllable_count: 451.8 618.680645161 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 9.59856630824 10% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 73.6967379446 48.9658058833 151% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.357142857 100.406767564 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4285714286 20.6045352989 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.64285714286 5.45110844103 177% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177011666997 0.236089414692 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0724514499676 0.076458572812 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.127131824386 0.0737576698707 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126578756144 0.150856017488 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.116116888643 0.0645574589148 180% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 11.7677419355 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 58.1214874552 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 10.9000537634 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 8.01818996416 113% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 86.8835125448 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 10.002688172 150% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.247311828 146% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 415, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... different locations is always likable. Because every location has its recipes. And pre...
^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 259, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...tion facilities, and fancy restaurants. While seeing this rapid development staring t...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, however, if, so, therefore, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 52.1666666667 58% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1489.0 1977.66487455 75% => OK
No of words: 272.0 407.700716846 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.47426470588 4.8611393121 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.48103885553 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06842164591 2.67179642975 115% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 212.727598566 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.580882352941 0.524837075471 111% => OK
syllable_count: 451.8 618.680645161 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 9.59856630824 10% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 73.6967379446 48.9658058833 151% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.357142857 100.406767564 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4285714286 20.6045352989 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.64285714286 5.45110844103 177% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177011666997 0.236089414692 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0724514499676 0.076458572812 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.127131824386 0.0737576698707 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126578756144 0.150856017488 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.116116888643 0.0645574589148 180% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 11.7677419355 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 58.1214874552 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 10.9000537634 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 8.01818996416 113% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 86.8835125448 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 10.002688172 150% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.247311828 146% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.