Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In twenty years there will be fewer cars in use than there are today. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
The transportation is the most important facility for business and living in the present. One of the most vital vehicles is a car used in the abundant activities; however, I strongly agree that the amount of cars will decrease in the next twenty years. Also, I have the three most common reasons which are to reduce air pollution, to save time for travelling and to decline the expenses for the maintenance.
Without a doubt, almost all cars emit some pollution in the air that it mainly causes numerous problems not only the healthy to all people but also damaging with environment. For example, in the 3 months ago, the several cities in Thailand were affected from air pollution which was higher than the standard value. One of the critical causes was the amount of cars on roads to rapidly increase in a few years ago. Therefore, the government makes decision to build many skytrains and subways in order to reduce the amount of cars and air pollution.
Second of all, most of the technologies will be develop so quickly in the present including the public transportation technology, so we can save time for travelling. For instance, if someone need to go to do a business at the capital city during the rush hour and raining cats and dogs, he may waste time for traffic jam various hours, especially heavy raining all day. On the other hand, he can save time so much when he utilizes the skytrain or subways.
Finally, when somebody always drives a car for travelling in plentiful places, he needs to maintain copious parts of his car such as an engine, oil, tire and the body structure. Exactly, he has to pay all expenses every time maintenance services. Nevertheless, if he uses the public transportation, he can save money to use for other necessaries in the future such as personal payment or accommodation.
In the conclusion, from the above reasons, I completely agree that the amount of cars will be decreased in the next twenty year owning to the advanced of technology to help save time, all expenses and reducing air pollution.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, however, if, may, nevertheless, second, so, therefore, as to, for example, for instance, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 43.0788530466 37% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.0752688172 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1716.0 1977.66487455 87% => OK
No of words: 355.0 407.700716846 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8338028169 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34067318298 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75025381599 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 212.727598566 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.557746478873 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 538.2 618.680645161 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 44.2338405868 48.9658058833 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.571428571 100.406767564 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3571428571 20.6045352989 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.64285714286 5.45110844103 177% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142280658507 0.236089414692 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0507205969381 0.076458572812 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0539585697894 0.0737576698707 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.087940539034 0.150856017488 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0379387290965 0.0645574589148 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 11.7677419355 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 58.1214874552 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.03 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 86.8835125448 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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