Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? At universities and colleges, sports and social activities are just as important as classes and libraries and should receive equal financial support. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Some people claim that sports and social activities are optional sectors and not as important as classes and libraries at university and colleges. However, prompt's statement argues sports and social activities have similar importance. I agree with the prompt statement for three reasons.
First of all, sports and social activities has equal importance as the classes and libraries because, they engages student with the society properly. Students at the university will able to learn the society and its function explicitly if the engage with social activities which help students to become a good citizen of the society. At university and colleges are to proper place to engage students with different kind of social activity. For example, when I was child, I visited the university sports center regularly with my father to see university football matches. And the football team was the best in the country as they get good financial support from the university.
Second, sports and social activities is an effective ways to develop leadership ability of the students. Many great leader across the world was active social activists and their social activity inaugurated at the university campus at the social activity center. In a sports team students able to learn work as a team and in social activity clubs they learn how to organize programs by organizing various programs such as music concerts, photo and art exhibitions etc.
Finally, from sports and social activities, students encounters people from different occupations and work fields which helps them to chose a career with proper knowledge of it. From good class and libraries students learn intellectual knowledge and can obtain good grades but to become socially active and mentally healthy they need participate sports and social activity. For example, Most of the Olympic athletes from US are come from university sports center. Without equal financial support to these sports center it would not have been easy from them to pursue their dream.
In conclusion, while it is important to build comfortable classes and libraries, the above three reasons clearly show that sports and social activity have equal significance and they should receive equal financial flexibility as well to build an educated and socially active generations.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...concerts, photo and art exhibitions etc. Finally, from sports and social activiti...
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...n easy from them to pursue their dream. In conclusion, while it is important to ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, however, if, second, so, well, while, for example, in conclusion, kind of, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 25.0 13.8261648746 181% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 43.0788530466 49% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1953.0 1977.66487455 99% => OK
No of words: 364.0 407.700716846 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36538461538 4.8611393121 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36792674256 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64854970533 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 212.727598566 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.486263736264 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 604.8 618.680645161 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.8728676886 48.9658058833 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.0625 100.406767564 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.75 20.6045352989 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.3125 5.45110844103 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.356836969804 0.236089414692 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133010752293 0.076458572812 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0631130794785 0.0737576698707 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.221855743654 0.150856017488 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0495233481633 0.0645574589148 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 11.7677419355 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 58.1214874552 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 10.1575268817 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 10.9000537634 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 86.8835125448 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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