I do agree with sports and social activities are the same important as classes and libraries. There are always says that sports and social activities will disturb distract your concentration on your major subject. But I think it can also help us to make a good job in class. Because people can strengthen our medical mental and physical health so that we can be more dynamic in studying. Besides, a muscular shape from daily sports and friendship made from social communication can give you a more confident attitude to your career.
Also, sports and social activities is our second class. The knowledge get from class and library is confined. Outdoor activities can make us know thing more limited to daily lives. We must understand that the purpose of study is to make us get more suitable to and join in social work. If we just limit our view in the contained view, we will lose the social ability which is more important to our future career. So that our campus should give establish both indoor study and outdoor activities from equal financial support. Only in this way can our school raise more
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, second, so, then, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 43.0788530466 58% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 52.1666666667 35% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 913.0 1977.66487455 46% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 192.0 407.700716846 47% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75520833333 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 4.48103885553 83% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46375087202 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 212.727598566 53% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583333333333 0.524837075471 111% => OK
syllable_count: 285.3 618.680645161 46% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.94265232975 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.1121083082 48.9658058833 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.0833333333 100.406767564 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 20.6045352989 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.08333333333 5.45110844103 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.53405017921 44% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213790573669 0.236089414692 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0917311557284 0.076458572812 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0884475104343 0.0737576698707 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172632097398 0.150856017488 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0206885563931 0.0645574589148 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 11.7677419355 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.03 10.9000537634 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 86.8835125448 46% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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