Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
At universities and colleges, sports and social activities are just as important as classes and libraries and should receive equal financial support.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In modern society, study and grade will not be the only measurement scale of students for a long time, but sports and social activities are also important standards the students have to meet. Universities today are not only a place for studying, but also for helping students have comprehensive development. Therefore, it is important that sports and social activities should receive equal financial support like classes and libraries in universities and colleges.
To be a student who is all-round development, health cannot be absent. Without a healthy body, students cannot study well and have great grades. For example, when I was a freshman in university, I did not know how helpful a healthy body is and I did not exercise without enough gym equipment at my university. At that time, I always feel very tired when I have studied for a long time. But a semester later, my university built a swimming pool with great equipment and a happy atmosphere. Then I began to go swimming twice a week and I started to enjoy swimming at that time. As time goes by, my body becomes healthier and my study becomes easier without getting tired. That is why I think sports need enough financial support.
Social activities are also an independent part of students’ lives because they may make new friends who may change their lives through those activities. There are also so many other reasons such as attending social activities can help students improve their social abilities and broaden their horizons. My college has given enough financial support to the social activities and you can see the students in our school can enjoy parties, competitions and organizations. Last time I joined a team which took part in a competition about Chinese medicine knowledge and I was really inspired by my team members for their knowledge. This time I won many friends who have the same pursuit as me as well as I won the prize.
Both sports and social activities are of great importance to students’ lives, and all of them need the same financial support as classes and libraries.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, may, really, so, then, therefore, well, for example, i think, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 52.1666666667 54% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1722.0 1977.66487455 87% => OK
No of words: 350.0 407.700716846 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32530772707 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77658430597 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.52 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 542.7 618.680645161 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.0323528358 48.9658058833 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.294117647 100.406767564 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5882352941 20.6045352989 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.41176470588 5.45110844103 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218001703025 0.236089414692 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0804350201587 0.076458572812 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.112991638791 0.0737576698707 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160600649819 0.150856017488 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0701918831317 0.0645574589148 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 11.7677419355 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 86.8835125448 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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