In modern society, achievements and grades in study are not the only evaluation criteria for students, meeting certain standards in sports and social activities is also important. Universities today are not only places for studying, but also a place where students make comprehensive developments. Therefore, it is rigid that sports and social activities should not receive equal financial support as well as classes and libraries in universities.
Surely, doing well in study is of great importance to students, so they need better classes and libraries. There is almost no other way of accumulating knowledge without attending classes or reading books. Good classes are favored by so many university students for they know they could learn useful skills in those classes. Besides, we all acknowledge the convenience of a particularly nice library for it provides us with abundant quantities of books. However, all the benefits of gorgeous classes and libraries do not mean that we should put it prior to other facilities for that all work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.
To be a student who is all-round development, health cannot be absent. A good health condition is the foundation of students’ excellence in study. For example, if the university’s gym equipment is deficient for students to exercise and freshmen will not even know how helpful a healthy body is to good study. Schoolmen will always feel exhausted when they have studied for a long time without a good physical condition built up by enough exercise. On the contrary, a university with great sports facilities is almost forever an obsession with all the students because they will be stronger along with outstanding studies.
Social activities are also an independent part of students’ lives because new friends who may change their lives are always made through those activities. Taking part in a competition with a team may help students win so many friends who have the same pursuit as them as well as prizes. Students can also be inspired by talented competitors and start learning from them to be a better person. Also, attending social activities can help students improve their social abilities and broaden their horizons. It is awful that a college does not give enough financial support to social activities and students cannot enjoy themselves in parties, competitions and clubs.
Both sports and social activities are of great importance to students’ lives, and all such things need the same financial support as classes and libraries.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, may, so, therefore, well, for example, as well as, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 43.0788530466 56% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2133.0 1977.66487455 108% => OK
No of words: 408.0 407.700716846 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22794117647 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49433085973 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8792990608 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.512254901961 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 649.8 618.680645161 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.6708312371 48.9658058833 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.263157895 100.406767564 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4736842105 20.6045352989 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.21052631579 5.45110844103 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222008127666 0.236089414692 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0756606140105 0.076458572812 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0894082582107 0.0737576698707 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145178170081 0.150856017488 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0631828496166 0.0645574589148 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 11.7677419355 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 10.9000537634 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 86.8835125448 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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