In modern society, study and grade is not the only measurement scale of students, sports and social activities are also important standards the students have to meet. Universities today are not only a place for studying, but also a place where students have comprehensive development. Therefore, it is rigid that sports and social activities should not receive equal financial support as well as classes and libraries in universities.
Surely, studying well is of great importance to students, so they need better classes and libraries. Attending classes and reading books in the library are all processes of accumulating knowledge. Good classes are favored by so many university students for the excellent environment. Besides, we all acknowledge the convenience of a particularly nice library for the abundant quantity of books there. All of the benefits of gorgeous classes and libraries do not mean that we should put it prior to other facilities for that all work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.
To be a student who is all-round development, health cannot be absent. Without a healthy body, students cannot study well and have wonderful grades. For example, when I was a freshman in university, the gym equipment was not enough for students to exercise and I did not know how helpful a healthy body is. At that time, I always felt exhausted when I had studied for a long time, but a semester later, my university built a swimming pool with a great atmosphere so that I began to go swimming twice a week and I started to enjoy swimming. As time goes by, my body becomes healthier along with my study easier without getting tired.
Social activities are also an independent part of students’ lives because new friends who may change their lives are always made through those activities. Also, attending social activities can help students improve their social abilities and broaden their horizons. It is awful if a college has not given enough financial support to the social activities and students cannot enjoy parties, competitions and organizations. Last time I joined a team which took part in a competition about Chinese medicine knowledge. I was really inspired by my team members for their wealth of knowledge. This time I won many friends who have the same pursuit as me as well as I won the prize.
Both sports and social activities are of great importance to students’ lives, and all of such things need the same financial support as classes and libraries.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 401, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: All the
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, may, really, so, therefore, well, for example, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 52.1666666667 69% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2070.0 1977.66487455 105% => OK
No of words: 415.0 407.700716846 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98795180723 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51348521516 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8574391734 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 212.727598566 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.50843373494 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 650.7 618.680645161 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.5955225956 48.9658058833 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.5 100.406767564 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.75 20.6045352989 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.05 5.45110844103 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210339095121 0.236089414692 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0686209867528 0.076458572812 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0896629439409 0.0737576698707 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139752158057 0.150856017488 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0758609252239 0.0645574589148 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 10.9000537634 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 86.8835125448 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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