In modern society, study and grade is not the only measurement scale of students, sports and social activities are also important standards the students have to meet. Universities today are not only a place for studying, but also a place where students have comprehensive development. Therefore, it is rigid that sports and social activities should not receive equal financial support as well as classes and libraries in universities.
Surely, studying well is of great importance to students, so they need better classes and libraries. Attending classes and reading books in the library are all processes of accumulating knowledge. Good classes are favored by so many university students for the excellent environment. Besides, we all acknowledge the convenience of a particularly nice library for the abundant quantities of books there. All of the benefits of gorgeous classes and libraries do not mean that we should put it prior to other facilities for that all work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.
To be a student who is all-round development, health cannot be absent. Without a healthy body, students cannot study well and have wonderful grades. For example, if the university’s gym equipment is deficient for students to exercise and students will not even know how helpful a healthy body is. Students will always feel exhausted when they have studied for a long time without enough exercise. On the contrary, a university with great sports facilities is almost forever an obsession to all the students because those students will have stronger bodies along with outstanding studies without getting tired.
Social activities are also an independent part of students’ lives because new friends who may change their lives are always made through those activities. Joining a team which took part in a competition may help students win so many friends who have the same pursuit as them as well as the prize. Students can also be inspired by talent competitors and start learning to them to be a better person. Also, attending social activities can help students improve their social abilities and broaden their horizons. It is awful that a college has not given enough financial support to the social activities and students cannot enjoy parties, competitions and organizations.
Both sports and social activities are of great importance to students’ lives, and all of such things need the same financial support as classes and libraries.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 404, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: All the
...the abundant quantities of books there. All of the benefits of gorgeous classes and librar...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, may, so, therefore, well, for example, as well as, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 43.0788530466 42% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 52.1666666667 65% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2070.0 1977.66487455 105% => OK
No of words: 394.0 407.700716846 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2538071066 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45527027702 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87916168467 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 212.727598566 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.497461928934 0.524837075471 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 636.3 618.680645161 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.5344295554 48.9658058833 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.947368421 100.406767564 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7368421053 20.6045352989 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.73684210526 5.45110844103 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196169863228 0.236089414692 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0743051698055 0.076458572812 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.09057035182 0.0737576698707 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141190672607 0.150856017488 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0730857538587 0.0645574589148 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 11.7677419355 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 10.9000537634 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 86.8835125448 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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